check out my new song &&tell me what you think (:

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  1. kaitlinlovesyou said:

    Post check out my new song &&tell me what you think (:

    okk... so its not done but ill give you the beginning. sounds much better with music (:
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    GAME OF LIFE

    sitting in the dark her head bowed low
    she screams God im all alone
    can you send somebody who cares <<verse 1
    is there someone like that out there
    cuz ive found love but it was lost
    and thats a real thin line to cross

    Like a crazy riddle
    little girl stuck in the middle
    and the whole worlds laughing at me
    im getting sick of this <<chorus
    everyday i get closer to calling it quits
    and ive had enough
    this game of life's too tough

    no doubt that she can find her way around the heartache
    shes had experience <<verse 2
    but shes learning that she still cant just be happy
    avoiding it will never get it fixed

    when their together its like dreaming without sleeping
    and hes the only one shed trust with all her secrets <<verse 3
    she tells him how nobody cares
    shes all alone and, oh, so scared

    Like a crazy riddle
    little girl stuck in the middle
    and the whole worlds laughing at me
    im getting sick of this <<chorus
    everyday i get closer to calling it quits
    and ive had enough
    this game of life's too tough
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    please please please tell me what you think!!!!! I WANT CRITISISM!! dont worry about hurting my feelings. THANKS (:
  2. cadyluna9 said:

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    i think the song is good.it should be a little longer.and i thnk the lyrics make sme sence but not a whole ton.thts just my opinion though!
  3. Lyricky said:

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    The song's good. I think u did well but u'll have to make it longer. dnt knw the kinda music its supposed to be. Maybe rap or otherwise.