No title - title needed

The world is goin' nowhere
No one stops to make a sound
No I don't think the world's fair
Is it even goin' round? Hmm?

(chorus):
I just think the world
Stopped in its tracks (Oh yeah)
I just think it's A
Matter-of-fact (Yeah)
I just think it's time
To get a grip (On life)
I don't wanna let it all
Just slip away

How can anyone be content
When there's so much pain to face
This world is facin torment
This world is a big disgrace yeah

(chorus)

How can we just sit around
When the world's on fire
How we just all back down
From all of the ****in' liars
How can we just all shut up
At the slightest of ease
How can we just all give up
On the thought of peace

(chorus 2x)

So if the world is goin' somewhere
I guess people are startin' to sound
I still don't think the world's fair
But at least it's goin' round

i lve the song!the tottle could be "wats up with the wrld."

Originally Posted by Inskeepruler

How we just all back down

Add "can" between how and we?

A possible title could be "Why Do We Give Up?"--

I like adding why to the title because you ask yourself questions that you don't really know the answer to.

"Stopped in it's tracks"


I'm guessing it's a pop song so the titles in the chorus.
It's there for people to hook on to.

it could be called "get a grip"

Looking back on these lyrics, it's pretty cool to see how I've evolved in my writing.

Originally Posted by Inskeepruler

Looking back on these lyrics, it's pretty cool to see how I've evolved in my writing.

I haven't seen your righting but to me it looks like your getting it. keep it up.
IMO I'd call it....
Stop the rotation
cause if the world stops roatation all els does..you know.
what do you think?

please post on my thread I wrote a rap love song for my wife. please leave feed back, thanks

like the last verse:
"So if the world is goin' somewhere
I guess people are startin' to sound
I still don't think the world's fair
But at least it's goin' round"

It turns the songs around from being all doom and gloom.