My first song. is it any good? please comment!!! Thank You

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  1. zippoincalifornia said:

    Default My first song. is it any good? please comment!!! Thank You

    What if

    I’ve been here and there
    Now I’m sitting down with a devil
    Johnson was here maybe Jimi to
    What if
    Oh what if, what if, what if
    What if I do What if I don’t
    Oh what if, what if, what if
    Dammed if I do Dammed if I don’t

    I sense a hound in the shadows
    I feel like I’m already cursed
    But I can’t find no crossroads that will work

    Oh what if, what if, what if
    What if I do What if I don’t
    Oh what if, what if, what if
    Dammed if I do Dammed if I don’t

    Oh I don’t know if I dare
    And I don’t know if I should
    But I can feel these blues all a calling me

    Oh what if, what if, what if
    What if I do What if I don’t
    Oh what if, what if, what if
    Dammed if I do Dammed if I don’t

    But I might like to trade it all in
    A short life of fame
    Just to spend one more day with her

    Oh what if, what if, what if
    What if I do What if I don’t
    Oh what if, what if, what if
    Dammed if I do Dammed if I don’t

    Say I do make a deal
    Will I make it past 27
    I don’t want “what if” to rule my eternity
     

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