Hi, I'm a a 16 year old lad from liverpool, who writes proper tunes with proper music.
I currently recording my first song, while I have tons written with serious lyrics the first is one entitled "Tropical Paradise" , a song of about a fantasy of leaving to some tropical paradise.
HERES MY PROBLEM - My brother says no one will take me seriously coz I'm 16 writing about this sort of thing.
tell me what you think
Tropical Paradise
I've been working and walking home through the frost
Its always raining, oh I feel so lost
I feel I need to move were theres beautifull women and beautifull views
No I can't stay , I really gotta gotta gotta get away
Chorus:
Matinis & French Bikinis
Senorita Magharita cant stop feeling these
Good vibes, or her warm thighs
Yes I'm happy in this Tropical Paradise
Spirits lift me high, up to blue skies
Right by the palm trees, under the ever greens, while the sun beams
On you and me, no we've got not place that we ought to be
And everyday by these waves...
Feels so right
'sippin'
Pina Coladas on ice
Lets dance in this sun together
And stay young forever
Chorus:
Matinis & French Bikinis
Senorita Magharita cant stop feeling these
Good vibes, or her warm thighs
Yes I'm happy in this Tropical Paradise
what do you think?
the music is great and really flows with the words
im just worried people will laugh at the topic coming from me