Hi,this is my first poem i am writing for this site but i do have some songs on lyrics review that you can review also.
Look at you
Standing in my direction
I thought me and you
Had the same reflection
But you
Tried to lead me to dissatisfaction
Why did you
Leave me alone in portions
I don't like being used.
I am just so confused
Theres more to it,but i don't know if it is good or not.So,please comment and tell me f i should add some more to it.I shouldn't bother adding more if it is boring.