Dream (please comment!)

I dreamt that you were mine
But I have to keep in mind
Dreams aren't reality

Woke up with a smile
But it faded in awhile
When I realized it wasn't real

Sometimes
I wish
I could dream forever
And most times
I think
My life could be better
Please give me a chance
To just have one dance
With you

Every word that I say to you
Is completely true
Please don't ever doubt me

I watched you walk away
And then I spent the day
Regretting that I didn't tell you

Sometimes
I wish
I could dream forever
And most times
I think
My life could be better
Please give me a chance
To just have one dance
With you

And now I don't know what to say
When I see your beautiful face
I guess I won't make a sound

Sometimes
I wish
I could dream forever
And most times
I think
My life could be better
Please give me a chance
To just have one dance
With you

All I want is to hold you
And hear you say that you love me too

Hi Adam

Your another one who needs to research song structures if you intend to do well in the music industry with your songs, if you write for yourself it doesn’t matter so much but this being the lyric forum I take it you’ll be writing for others, if you want to give a composer a chance at creating a melody with a rhythm and a steady beat the song needs structure for instance

6 words a line
8 lines a verse
4 lines a chorus
4 lines a bridge

I’ll set you an instance before I turn in for the night I’ve made a new title, just to show you what I mean, if you want to use any of this material feel free

ONLY DREAM OF ME
V1
I dreamt that you were mine
But know that dreams aren’t real
But I want you all the time
Because that’s just how I feel
V2
I can’t wait to fall asleep
And take you for another dance
If I could live within my dream
I would surely take the chance
chorus
I know that I’m a dreamer
Cos that’s were you will be
I’ll always dream along with you
If you will only dream of me

Only dream of me, only dream of me

V3
Bla, bla, bla and so on
V4
Bla, bla, bla and so on
Another chorus, followed the hook again as I’ve shown then the
Bridge the end of you story, followed by another chorus, followed by
The HOOK as many times as you feel necessary.

That structure or something akin will give a composer the chance to form some sort of a rhythm and a steady beat for a melody, because it needs regularity

Have fun, jony bek