Sakınma Hiç - Tan

hiii again i did another try i think it's better than the first one (maybe this one is much easier)
i hope anyone correct me plz
sağol my friends

Sakınma Hiç - Tan



Sanma ki yaşıyorum,//don't think that I'm living
Sanma ki ben çok mutluyum// don't think that I'm so happy
Tek tesellim hayallerim,// my only comfort is my imaginations
Kendi kendimi arıyorum.//on my own I'm searching

İstemem güneş batsın,// I don't want your sun set (I guess this mean I don't want you to leave)
İstemem karanlığı,//I don't want darkness
Böyle bir akşamüstü çıkardın dargınlığı,//such an annoying evening you get me out
Karanlık bahtım gibi// as my dark luck
Sardı tüm benliğimi.// spread all over me

Böyle bir akşam üstü bıraktın ellerimi,//such a night you left my hands
Sanma ki yaşıyorum,//don't think that I'm living
Sanma ki ben çok mutluyum// don't think that I'm so happy
Tek tesellim hayallerim,// my only comfort is my imaginations
Kendi kendimi arıyorum.//on my own I'm searching,

Gururun mu bırakmaz,//won't you leave your pride
Geri dönmeye seni,//turning back to you
Acılara bürüttün hem kendini hem beni//suffering covering also yourself and me
Aşkta gurur olmazmış bunu sen söylemiştin,//in love there is no pride its what you have said
Ellerin ellerimde ne yeminler etmiştin,//your hands in my hands what swears you have made
Gözlerin gözlerimde çok yeminler etmiştin..//your eyes in my eyes lots swears you have made

Sanma ki yaşıyorum,//don't think that I'm living
Sanma ki ben çok mutluyum// don't think that I'm so happy
Tek tesellim hayallerim,// my only comfort is my imaginations
Kendi kendimi arıyorum.//on my own I'm searching,

hi, beso

following are my comments on your transLation.

Kendi kendimi arıyorum.//on my own I'm searching

Kendi kendimi arıyorum.// I ('m) Look(ing) for myseLf

Normally it's either kendimi (myseLf) or kendi kendime (on my own)
but people use it.

İstemem güneş batsın, // I don't want your sun set (I guess this mean I don't want you to leave)

There isn't any 'your' there or else he would have said 'güneşin'

İstemem güneş batsın, // I don't want sun to set /or maybe/ I don't want sunset

Böyle bir akşamüstü çıkardın dargınlığı, // such an annoying evening you get me out

çıkardın dargınlığı -> dargınlığı çıkardın -> dargınlık çıkarmak

in your words
in such an evening you've caused annoyance

word order is correct but since it wasn't her that caused annoyance
more properLy

in an evening such you've become cross with me

Karanlık bahtım gibi// as my dark luck
Sardı tüm benliğimi.// spread all over me

I liked it

Tek tesellim hayallerim,// my only comfort is my imaginations

I would use consolation or relief instead of comfort

Gururun mu bırakmaz,//won't you leave your pride
Geri dönmeye seni,//turning back to you

Is it your pride that won't let you return/come back?

Acılara bürüttün hem kendini hem beni//suffering covering also yourself and me

bürümek: to cover, wrap
bürünmek: to be covered
büründürmek: to cause to be covered (*proper way of bürütmek)

bürütmek seems to be grammaticaLLy correct but people don't use it;
may be it doesn't sound nice and it has a local usage with different meaning (TDK)

so
Acılara büründürdün hem kendini hem beni
you've caused both you(rself) and me to be covered in pains
you've wrapped us in pains


by the way, I liked your translation.

see you



seLimmm

selim thanks soooooooo much i really appreciate it