Funny/nasty song/

pretty funny.

but Nothing to brag about though. from your post. http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ra...und-1-a-2.html
Nice for a slap stick style. like 2 live crew freak nasty s*** great for booty music. not a diss
just my O.P.

As far as structure good job. some things could have rhymed better in a few spots.
but all in all good work....

These are some of my rhymes i've posted
http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ra...is-needed.html
http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ra...ed-please.html

http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ra...ck-please.html

thats 3 out many I've wrote on here.

ok thanks and i will look

Your welcome. and Steve it's all good. be cool homie.

oh im just here for fun.. not to hate.. im not a serious writter or rapper.. i come here to get out my feelings and emotions. no one i know personal knows i write music