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Could someone check my translation of the "Man of the beach"?

Omul plajei

La birou am un sef idiot
Nu-ntelege ca eu trebuie sa inot
Secretara mea a-nteles
Sta pe plaja si bea linistita un nes

I have an idiot boss in the office
He doesn’t understand that I need to swim
My secretary has understood
She stays in the beach relaxed and drinks a nes

Toti colegii imi spun ca-s nebun
Si ca-n viata reusesti numai in costum
Eu le zic ca un slip e de-ajuns
Zece beri si-o gagica cu trupul uns

All colleagues tell me that I’m crazy
And that life is manageable only in a suit
I tell them that a slip is close
Ten beers and a chick with greasy body

Fratilor va spun cinstit
Orasul m-a nenorocit
Hai sa ne mutam la mare
O tara de orase goale
Singura noastra scapare
Sa ramanem toti la mare

Brothers, I tell you honestly.
The city was unlucky
Let’s move to the seaside
A land free from cities
Is our only escape
Let’s all remain at the seaside

Pe vecinii mei de la bloc
Ii anunt ca ma mut la cort
Soarele oricat m-as chinui
Nu rasare din blocul de vizavi

To my neighbors of the bloc-house
I announce that I’m moving to a tent
The sun as much as I would..
Doesn’t rise from the bloc-house opposite

In asfalt nu te poti oglindi
Nici in baie nu poti pluti
Nu mai vreau sa fac dragoste-n pat
Marea a-nteles si m-a adoptat

On the asphalt you can’t be mirrored
Also in a bath you can’t float
I don’t want to make love in the bed anymore
The sea has understood and adopted me

Fratilor va spun cinstit
….
Brothers, I tell you honestly
….

good job

Originally Posted by Euridike

Could someone check my translation of the "Man of the beach"?

Omul plajei

La birou am un sef idiot
Nu-ntelege ca eu trebuie sa inot
Secretara mea a-nteles
Sta pe plaja si bea linistita un nes

I have an idiot boss at the office
He doesn’t understand that I need to swim
My secretary has understood
She stays on the beach and relaxed drinks an instant coffee

Toti colegii imi spun ca-s nebun
Si ca-n viata reusesti numai in costum
Eu le zic ca un slip e de-ajuns
Zece beri si-o gagica cu trupul uns

All colleagues tell me that I’m crazy
And that in life you succeed only in suit
I tell them that a swimming suit is enough
Ten beers and a chick with greasy body

Fratilor va spun cinstit
Orasul m-a nenorocit
Hai sa ne mutam la mare
O tara de orase goale
Singura noastra scapare
Sa ramanem toti la mare

Brothers, I tell you honestly.
The city has destroyed me
Let’s move to the seaside
A country of empty cities
our only escape
to remain all at the seaside

Pe vecinii mei de la bloc
Ii anunt ca ma mut la cort
Soarele oricat m-as chinui
Nu rasare din blocul de vizavi

To my neighbors of the bloc-house
I announce that I’m moving to a tent
The sun as much as I would strugle
Doesn’t rise from the opposite bloc-house

In asfalt nu te poti oglindi
Nici in baie nu poti pluti
Nu mai vreau sa fac dragoste-n pat
Marea a-nteles si m-a adoptat

On the asphalt you can’t be mirrored
Also in a bath you can’t float
I don’t want to make love in the bed anymore
The sea has understood and adopted me

Fratilor va spun cinstit
….
Brothers, I tell you honestly
….

thank You kmmy!

you r welcome