Hey everyone, just want to share this little thing I came up with last night...
It's not finished jet, but plz just give me some thoughts on it..
Maybe it would be important to tell the "genre" is the Grunge/Metal/Punk...
She's the mother of all, my creations
She is there when i'm glad
She's the burning of all, my ambitions
She don't care when i'm sad
She's the mother of...
All fear, all lust, all need...
Lifted me up, brought me down
Made me king, stole my crown
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All Fear, Lust, and Need... plz give some feedback :D
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Some feedback would be nice...
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Hey, I like this. Would enjoy more.
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Thank you :D
Originally Posted by Inskeepruler
Thank you, it really means a lot to me...
Hope to hear from some more ? -
Yeah I can tell you are talented. Either some new or more on this, but yeah I'm excited to see more. I'm workin on somethin I started on last night. Originally Posted by Nicklas C
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Nice, just post it here, and I'll give you my honest feedback. Originally Posted by Inskeepruler
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LOL, the genre really matches the song. I can't wait to hear the rest. It sounds like it's going to be really good.
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Thank you so much, I think I better start working on this song, it seems that people like it so far. but lately I've just been too lazy to do it Originally Posted by Acheramee
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grunge n metal arent my favorite styles, but these lyrics fit. i dunno what youre talking about, what is the mother of all creation, but it sounds 'metal-y'.
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Well, actually the "mother" is my reference to alcohol, basically because all of my greatest ideas seems to come when I'm drunk Originally Posted by thehough1
but at the same time, I can be really sad and think too much about small problems and so, when I'm drunk.
So yeah it's a song about my relation to alcohol (NOT THAT I'M AN ALCOHOLIC, IT'S ONLY IN THE WEEKENDS WITH MY FRIENDS I DRINK, just to be clear
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Great!..it's very nice
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Originally Posted by vincom1111
Thanks
