Please comments are appreciated, since there is improvement I need in my Iraqi/arabic. thanks
http://www.bagdady.com/song_listen_1187_1.html
hope you guys like it.
Ahmed
يا روحي ذوبي ذوبي
oh soul melt melt
كل همي من محبوبي
all my sadness is from my loved ones
غربه وسهر خلاني
In the wilderness and awake all night they left me
تاهت علي دروبي ***
overshadowing over me is my path
آنا اللي على نياتي
Im on nothing other than my intention
واتعامل بكل طيبه
and work towards all good
قلبي طفل خاف الله
My heart, kids fear God
تتفنن بتعذيبه
And threads into torture
لاتصير مثل الدنيا
Dont be like the world
مصلحه وشك وغيبه
repaired, and doubts and estranged
امشي عدل وياها
Walk straight with her
تمشي معي مقلوبي ***
walk with me, with my hearts
تجربه ومنها تأذيت
try her out, and from her bothered
ياروحي احاول انسى
oh my soul, i tried to forget
كل ما اصبر هالروح
All i am patient with this soul
تقلي اريده هسه
and i say i want her now
بلبل يغرد مجروح
the canary sings (eats?) injured
والغير يسمع وينسى
and anybody else hears and forgets
ماعندي غير الموال
I have nothing other than loyalty.
والصبر على المكتوبي ***
and I will endure (be patient) with what is written for me
ياروحي ذوبي ذوبي كل همي من محبوبي غربه وسهر خلاني تاهت علي دروبي
Same chorus, repeat as above