Shabnam Surayyo - Az Kudumi Safar

Can anyone correct and translate those lyrics? I think, there are some mistakes. I found it on the internet.:

hanooz avale eshqast
safar donbale dare
too ra nadide raftom
del az ma gele dare

hanooz avale eshqast
safar donbale dare
doo ra nadide raftom
del az ma gele dare

khoda rozeshe biareh
too ra bebinom doobare
too ra bebinom doobare

khoda rozeshe biareh
too ra bebinom doobare
too ra bebinom doobare

az Kudumi Safar
az kudumi shab
ahenge bekhanom
ke dar dele too bishinom
qame delete bechinom
qame delete bechinom

ke dar dele too bishinom
qame delete bechinom
qame delete bechinom

az nakhma , nabayed jodai bejoyem
in nakhmera sokot ast, bayed khodaye begooim

Ma az abr o baran gorezan
ma neshaste dar zereh navdan

bashad ke bare
bahare shavad

yare sazavar yare shavad
bashad ke bare
bahare shavad
yare sazavar yare shavad

az Kudumi Safar
az kudumi shab
ahenge bekhanom
ke dar dele too bishinom
qame delete bechinom
qame delete bechinom

ke dar dele too bishinom
qame delete bechinom
qame delete bechinom

az chashme doonya
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ma kheir az jodai chi kardem
ma darmande dar dame del

shayed ke roozi beyabem too ra
ya ke be khabem bebinam too ra

shayed ke roozi beyabem too ra
ya ke be khabem bebinam too ra

Hanooz avale eshqast
Safar donbale dare
Too ra nadide raftom
Del az ma gele dare

Hanooz avale eshqast
Safar donbale dare
Too ra nadide raftom
Del az ma gele dare

khoda rozeshe biareh
too ra bebinom doobare
too ra bebinom doobare

khoda rozeshe biareh
too ra bebinom doobare
too ra bebinom doobare

Az Kudumi Safar
az kudumi shab
ahenge bekhanom
ke dar dele too bishinom
qame delete bechinom
qame delete bechinom

ke dar dele too bishinom
qame delete bechinom
qame delete bechinom

ke dar dele too bishinom
qame delete bechinom
qame delete bechinom




And the link to the song:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WjAGNCQWzmw




Pleaaaase, anyooone? *__*

No one?!

hanooz avale eshqast
It's only the beginning of love
safar donbale dare
This trip is a continuous one,
to ra nadide raftom
I went away without seeing you beforehand,
del az ma gele dare
This heart is blaming me,

hanooz avale eshqast
It is only the beginning of love,

safar donbale dare
This is a continuous trip,
to ra nadide raftom
I went away without seeing you beforehand,
del az ma gele dare
This heart is blaming me,

khoda rozesho biareh
May G-d bring the day,
too ra bebinom doobare,
That I see you again,
too ra bebinom doobare
That I see you again

khoda rozeshe biareh
May G-d bring the day,
too ra bebinom doobare
That I see you again,
too ra bebinom doobare
That I see you again,

az Kudumin Safar
From which of the trips

az kudumin shab
From which night
ahenge bekhanom
Shoould I sing,
ke dar dele too bishinam
That I place myself inside your heart
qame delete bechinam
To pick the sorrow from your heart

qame delete bechinam
To pick the sorrow from your heart


ke dar dele to bishinam

qame delete bechinam
To pick the sorrow from your heart

qame delete bechinom
To pick the sorrow from your heart



az ghamat , nabayed jodai bejoyam.
I shouldn't take leave from your sorrow,
in naghmeh ra sokoot ast, bayad khodaye begoyam,
There is silence to this song, I should sing it to G-d,

Ma az abr o baran gorezan
We are running away from the clouds from the rain

ma neshaste dar zereh navdan
We are sitting under the gutter on the roof,

bashad dobareh
Hoping that again
bahare shaved
The spring comes back

yare sazavar yare ma shaved,
The lover become deservedly ours
bashad ke bare
Hoping that again
bahare shaved
The sring comes back
yare sazavar yare shaved
The lover become deservedly ours

az Kudumi Safar
From which trip
az kudumi shab,
From which night,
ahenge bekhanam
Should I sing?
ke dar dele to bishinam
So that I place myself into your heart,
qame delete bechinam
Pick the sorrow from your heart,
qame delete bechinam
Pick the sorrow from your heart,

ke dar dele too bishinam
So that I place myself into your heart
qame delete bechinam
Pick the sorrow from your heart,

qame delete bechinam
Pick the sorrow from your heart,


az chashme doonya
[pick the sorrow] from the eyes of the world
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ma gheir az jodai chi kardem
What did we do but staying away from one another?
ma darmande dar dame del
We became hopeless in the trap of feelings,

shayed ke roozi beyabem too ra
Maybe one day I will find you,
ya ke be khabem bebinam too ra
Or I might see you in my dreams,

shayed ke roozi beyabam too ra
Maybe one day I will find you
ya ke be khabem bebinam too ra
Or maybe one day I will see you in my dreams,

Hanooz avale eshqast
Its only the beginning of love,
Safar donbale dare,
This trip is a continuous one
Too ra nadide raftom
I went away without seeing you beforehand,
Del az ma gele dare
This heart is blaming me,
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The rest is the same
I hope you enjoy it. You did a good job transliterating the song, by the way, I did not have the opportunity to listen to the song myself ( due to filtering and all) and I exclusively used your words for the translation. 

Thanks soooo much <3

I did not transliterate it.
In fact - I didn't find even the persian lyrics. But it sounded different than the lyrics I posted here - so I wanted them eventually to be corrected
Anyways - thanks again <3

Here’s my best effort and I believe is many times more accurate than the original one but I may have missed a word here or there because it goes pretty fast.
There is an “original” version of this song that’s slower but the lyrics are slightly different. Elinor did a great job translating what you had provided but I think I need to give you a new one since many of the words are different in this version.

[verse 1] X2
/hanooz avvale eshqast,
/safar donbaala daara
/to raa naadida raftom,
/del az maa gele daara

This is just the beginning of our love,
This journey will continue
I left without seeing you
And my heart is griping

[verse 2] X2
/khodaa rozeshe biaara,
/to raa bobinom dobaara
/to raa bobinom dobaara

I pray for the day
That I can see you again
That I can see you again

[verse 3]
/az Kudumi safar, az kudumi shab, aahenge bekhanom
/ke dar dele too neshinom, ghame delte bechinom, ghame delte bechinom (X2)

From which journey, which night, should I sing [for you]
to make my way back into your heart, to take your pain away, take your pain away


[verse 4]
/az naghma naghma , navaaye jodaai bejoyeem
/in naghmeraa ke sorode khodaayaa begooyeem
/maa, az abr o baaraan gorezaan
/maa, benshaste dar zereh navdaan

In each melody, I hear tunes of separation
Tell me God, who has sang this melody
We have been running from the clouds and the rain
But we have been sitting under the downpipe

[verse 5] X2
/bashad debaare bahaare shavad
/yaare sazaavaar yaare shavad

I hope that spring comes again
I hope that we become deserving of being each others’ sweetheart

[verse 3]

[verse 6]
/az chashme donyaa fetaadeem be har jaa fetaadeem
/yaad naa gerefteh shenaa raa be daryaa fetaadeem
/maa, ghair az jodaai chi kardeem
/maa, darmaande dar dame dardeem

Anywhere we went, we fell from grace
Without knowing how to swim, we leaped into the ocean
What did we get from all the separation?
We are helpless and entrapped in agony

[verse 7]X2
/shaayed ke roozi beyaabam to raa
/yaa ke bekhaabem bobinam to raa

Maybe one day I will find you
Or I will fall asleep and see you in my dreams

[verse 1] X2
[verse 2] X2
[verse 3]