Complete the song please

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  1. Burnz said:

    Red face Complete the song please

    Hey i have come up with a verse but could someone please complete the song for me

    Verse 1

    I'm always waking up too early
    My thoughts are never at rest
    When your mind is a mess, so is mine
    It's a terrific price to pay, but your worth it
    if i lost you i'd be nothing
    i'll travel to the depths to find you baby
    i would be heartbroken
    if i lost you
     
  2. LovinAllMusic said:

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    Verse 1

    I'm always waking up too early
    My thoughts are never at rest
    When your mind is a mess, so is mine
    It's a terrific price to pay, but your worth it
    if i lost you i'd be nothing
    i'll travel to the depths to find you baby
    i would be heartbroken
    if i lost you

    Chorus

    When i'm with you i don't know what to do
    It's like i'm losing my mind because this is true
    I am happy that your in my world
    That i'm your man and your my girl



    [JUST TELL ME IF YOU LIKED WHAT I WROTE SO FAR AND I WILL FINISH THE REST SOON!]
     
  3. Burnz said:

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    Yeh I love
     
  4. insistasia said:

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    don't know music but this is what i got for the hook

    Vere 1
    I'm always waking up too early
    My thoughts are never at rest
    When your mind is a mess, so is mine
    It's a terrific price to pay, but your worth it
    if i lost you i'd be nothing
    i'll travel to the depths to find you baby
    i would be heartbroken
    if i lost you

    Hook
    So many people in the world search for so many things
    I search for you cause you make my world
    You make me who I am
    You are all I need

    Chorus

    When i'm with you i don't know what to do
    It's like i'm losing my mind because this is true
    I am happy that your in my world
    That i'm your man and your my girl
     
  5. Burnz said:

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    thxs so much
     
  6. LovinAllMusic said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Burnz View Post
    if your good at composing music could you write the music for the chorus.

    Here is what I have for the Verse , note that I have not put the whole of the verse 1 but you have a general idea.


    F
    G
    Am
    C

    F
    G
    Am
    Lol, could you explain what you are saying a little better. I'm 13 and it kinda takes me a while to "get" things. Im sorry.
     
  7. Burnz said:

    Cool

    well i'm 14 and i wrote this, verse 1 of the lyrics and the music
     
  8. Burnz said:

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    well you play in this order, F chord, G chord, Am Chord + C chord