Don't know what to call this, any suggestions?

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  1. Tracy-Turnblad's Avatar

    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    Spitting fire back and forth now
    Times have changed in just a few months
    Neighbours complaining from the fights and
    What have we done to make you change

    I know that she’s terrified
    Of what you’re gonna say
    When she tells you we can't live this way
    No one knows what to expect from someone who's so insane
    Living this way is insane but you just expect him to change, I hope he does change, I know he won’t change

    Why can't I get through the night
    Without another fight
    I'm tired of the hurting
    Is it really worth it?
    Am I all alone again?
    Cause I am kinda feeling like I'm screaming
    With my mouth shut
    When it's really open.

    The only noises in my head
    Are consumed of your voice
    From all the pain and hatred
    How long can you kick somebody down
    Before a foot breaks?

    And why can't I get through the night
    Without another fight
    I'm tired of the hurting
    Is it really worth it?
    Am I all alone again cause
    I am kinda feeling like I'm screaming
    With my mouth shut when it's really open.

    I'm sick of always being the one
    To pick up the peices
    When she breaks down, when she melts down
    In the end.
    We should've left you months ago
    But she won't let go
    And I can't leave her on her own
    Plus I have nowhere to go
    Maybe this time
    His clenched fist and my helping hand
    Will be her sign that she doesn't need you to rely on

    And why can't I get through the night
    Without another fight I'm tired of the hurting
    Is it really worth it?
    Am I all alone again cause
    I am kinda feeling like I'm screaming
    With my mouth shut
    When it's really open.
    Spitting fire back and forth now
    Things won't change in just a few months
     
  2. smileygal's Avatar

    smileygal said:

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    good songg!! for the title mayb change or fighting back... ?? just some ideas... keep writing! ur good!!
    xoxo smiley
    Trust, love, peace and happiness are the key to a great life!! (: (:
     
  3. LyricsAngel's Avatar

    LyricsAngel said:

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    The song is very good, and I think "Screaming With My Mouth Shut" would be a good title(sorry, I'm not very creative)
     
  4. Sewn Up's Avatar

    Sewn Up said:

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    Hmmm......given the content of the song, I would say "Escaping Home". That seems like it sums up everything that's said in the lyrics.
    Have you ever seen blood in the moonlight? It appears quite black. Have you ever seen spiders crawling on the graves?
     
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    Inskeepruler said:

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    I like it.
     
  6. Tracy-Turnblad's Avatar

    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    I'm thinking about 'silently screaming' cuz one of the things it's about is when you know someone's screaming inside but they're not screaming out loud, and when you're screaming out loud, but it's as if your scream is silent cuz cuz no one's listening.
     
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    Taking another look at the lyrics, I'd like to make the suggestion of "Mouth Wide Shut".
    Have you ever seen blood in the moonlight? It appears quite black. Have you ever seen spiders crawling on the graves?