Since I HAVE TO improve my Romanian (which is horribly bad) I'll translate some songs I like and I'd be grateful for corrections
Don't hesitate to critizise!!! This translation for example isn't good at all, so please somebody make it sound good
Trooper - Doar a mea
Daca ai vrea acum sa-ti spun tot ce simt eu
If you wanted me to tell you now all that I feel
Ti-e sufletul prea rece si cred ca mi-ar fi greu
Your sour is too cold and I think it would be hard for me
Privirea mea e trista, paradis pierdut
My story is sad, paradise lost
Cat te-am iubit, o, Doamne, n-am sa pot sa uit
How much I loved you, oh God, I won't be able to forget you
Nu vreau sa fiu mereu
I don't want to be forever
Ca-n anii de liceu
Like in the high school years
Cum am putut sa cred in tine, intr-un vis rebel Is "rebel" an adjective here?
How was I able to believe in you, in a rebellious dream
Tineri cind eram
When we were young
Visam si imi doream
I was dreaming and I was wishing
Sa nu ajung o viata sa traiesc din amintiri
Not to come to life to live from memories ???
N-am vrut sa cred ca ai un suflet chinuit
I didn't want to believe that you had a ??? soul
Dar m-am trezit acum, in lume-am revenit
But now I woke up, I came back to the world
Acum o duc mai bine, o alta am aflat
Now I'll lead it in a better way, I learned another one
La revedere proasto, adio, am plecat
Goodbye, stupid one, bye, I'm gone
Nu vreau sa fiu mereu
I don't want to be forever
Ca-n anii de liceu
Like in the high school years
Cum am putut sa cred in tine, intr-un vis rebel Is "rebel" an adjective here?
How was I able to believe in you, in a rebellious dream
Tineri cind eram
When we were young
Visam si imi doream
I was dreaming and I was wishing
Sa nu ajung o viata sa traiesc din amintiri
Not to come to life to live from memories ???
Cat am vrut sa te stiu
How much I wanted to know
Doar a mea
That you were only mine
Am visat sa ramai
I was dreaming that you remained
Doar a mea
Only mine
Totdeauna vei fi
You'll always be
Doar a mea
Only mine
In toti anii ce vin
In all the years that'll come
Doar a mea
Only mine
Nu mai vreau sa te stiu
I don't want to know anymore
Doar a mea
That you were only mine
Daca pleci sau ramai
If you leave or stay
Tot asa
Whatever you want Is there a better translation?
Poti sa faci ce vei vrea
You can do what you'll want to Future??
Treaba ta
Your business
Voi uita ca ai fost
I'll forget that you've been
Doar a mea
Only mine
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Nu mai conteaza
Poate ca tu ma cunosti din vise,
Maybe you know me from dreams
Din vise-n care m-ai uitat, da, da.
From dreams in which you've seen me
Veneai usor, erai o ispita
You came slowly, you were a temptation
Si ma prindeai în vraja ta, da, da.
And you brought me under your spell
Si azi îmi spui ca tu nu m-ai iubit deloc,
And today you tell me that you've never loved me at all
Tot ce a fost – cenusa-n foc, cenusa-n foc, da, da.
All that has been - ash in the fire, ash in the fire
Nimic nu mai conteaza, de astazi drumul e deschis,
Nothing matters anymore, from today the road is open
N-avem decât o viata, dar nu e timp sa o traim.
We don't have more than one life, but there's no time for us to live it
Poate ca eu am trait in vise,
Maybe I've been living in dreams
In vise din care tu ai plecat, da, da.
In dreams you left from
Când ma trezeam te aveam în minte
When I woke up I had you in mind
Si te simteam mereu a mea, da, da.
And I always felt you with me?? -
* o duc mai bine = I live a better life
Originally Posted by Mimi0920
Since I HAVE TO improve my Romanian (which is horribly bad) I'll translate some songs I like and I'd be grateful for corrections
Don't hesitate to critizise!!! This translation for example isn't good at all, so please somebody make it sound good
Trooper - Doar a mea
Daca ai vrea acum sa-ti spun tot ce simt eu
If you wanted me to tell you now all that I feel
Ti-e sufletul prea rece si cred ca mi-ar fi greu
Your sour is too cold and I think it would be hard for me
Your soul is too cold and I think it would be hard for me
Privirea mea e trista, paradis pierdut
My story is sad, paradise lost
My eyes are sad ,lost paradise
Cat te-am iubit, o, Doamne, n-am sa pot sa uit
How much I loved you, oh God, I won't be able to forget you
Nu vreau sa fiu mereu
I don't want to be forever
Ca-n anii de liceu
Like in the high school years
Cum am putut sa cred in tine, intr-un vis rebel Is "rebel" an adjective here?
How was I able to believe in you, in a rebellious dream
How could I believed in you ,in a rebellious dream [yes 'rebel' adjective]
Tineri cind eram
When we were young
Visam si imi doream
I was dreaming and I was wishing
Sa nu ajung o viata sa traiesc din amintiri
Not to come to life to live from memories ???
Not to come to live a life from memories [meaning living in the past]
N-am vrut sa cred ca ai un suflet chinuit
I didn't want to believe that you had a ??? soul
overdone ,wretched soul
Dar m-am trezit acum, in lume-am revenit
But now I woke up, I came back to the world
Acum o duc mai bine, o alta am aflat
Now I'll lead it in a better way, I learned another one
Now I'm better ,I learned another one*
La revedere proasto, adio, am plecat
Goodbye, stupid one, bye, I'm gone
Nu vreau sa fiu mereu
I don't want to be forever
Ca-n anii de liceu
Like in the high school years
Cum am putut sa cred in tine, intr-un vis rebel Is "rebel" an adjective here?
How was I able to believe in you, in a rebellious dream
Tineri cind eram
When we were young
Visam si imi doream
I was dreaming and I was wishing
Sa nu ajung o viata sa traiesc din amintiri
Not to come to life to live from memories ???
Cat am vrut sa te stiu
How much I wanted to know
Doar a mea
That you were only mine
Am visat sa ramai
I was dreaming that you remained
Doar a mea
Only mine
Totdeauna vei fi
You'll always be
Doar a mea
Only mine
In toti anii ce vin
In all the years that'll come
In all the coming years
Doar a mea
Only mine
Nu mai vreau sa te stiu
I don't want to know anymore
I don't want to know you anymore
Doar a mea
That you were only mine
Only mine
Daca pleci sau ramai
If you leave or stay
Tot asa
Whatever you want Is there a better translation?
Poti sa faci ce vei vrea
You can do what you'll want to Future??
Treaba ta
Your business
Voi uita ca ai fost
I'll forget that you've been
Doar a mea
Only mine -
As for your 2nd post , at the end of it ,I think it's more appropiate to say
"I always felt you were mine" because "a mea" is possesive form [genitive].
My opinion is that you're in the good direction with learning Romanian .Congrats
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Valuri
Valul ce se sparge de mal
The wave that breaks ????
Intr-o mare de iubire
In a sea of love
Te-asteapta acum din nou sa vii!
Is now waiting for you to come again
Marea e un carnaval
The sea is a carnival
Nu stiu ce te mai retine
I don't know what is still holding you back
Aripi de apa vin spre tine!
The wings?? of water are coming towards you
Cine te cheama si cine revine?
Who is calling you and who is coming back?
Cine te-ndeamna cu bratele pline?
Who is pushing you ??
Cu bratele pline, e langa tine
???, it's next to you
Si-ncearca sa smulga destďne!
And trying to carry away destinies ??? -
Multumesc frumos!! Acum am inteles ce inseamna Originally Posted by gea
I was reading the sentence 10 times and was confused more and more!!
Thanks a lot for your help!! -
I know the feeling
you're always welcome
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*to urge / to push someone from the back ;again "cu bratele pline" word by word ->full hands ,but it makes no sense to me Originally Posted by Mimi0920
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Thank you again!!
Metaphors are too tricky for me, there should be an "Attention! Metaphor!" sign
But now it makes sense
