I"ve been trying to write for a while, I just don't really know if what I write is any good. I'd appreciate any criticism you all have. Thanks.

Let’s go out tonight
Let’s go downtown
You be my misses
I’ll be your sir
No one will know us
We’ll be all alone

Kiss me under the moonlight
Kiss me under the stairs
No one can stop us
They won’t see our scars

The bars won’t card us
The clubs won’t close
Don’t make excuses
It’s just us tonight
No one will know us
We’ll be all alone

Kiss me under the moonlight
Kiss me under the stairs
No one can stop us
They won’t see our scars

They can’t see us
They can’t see us
So won’t you

Kiss me under the moonlight
Kiss me under the stairs
No one can stop us
They won’t see our scars