jsut got to thinking and wrote these, give me ur opinion on this **** even if you think its garbage, not ur usual stuff

trapped in a closet of his emotions,
locks of insecurity and misplaced trust keeping him safe,
he peaks through the lock,
hoping for a moment to break free and unlock,
this door that kept him away from everything he wanted to be apart of,
he closes his eyes and dreams of times when his only problems were those cause by dimes and social crimes

and

trapped in an asylum of emotion within his mind
stuck way behind
struggling to see the meaning of the daily grind
on the surface, well **** you he's fine
steadily inclined to be the least known man of all time

alright here is my opinion, i think you have some potential but these lyrics just dont make sence, do u wanna battle some time?