another unfinished rap.

this is sorta so slower rap song. it is not finished. what do you think????

(chorus)

comin straight up out the hood,
its a hard life,
when you lay your head down better pray every night,
these boys just aint playin, they are relentless,
cops scared to arrest em, they afraid to witness,
and i really dont blame em, but i live through it everyday,
this will never end, it is just the game,

(verse 1)

im straight from the hood and i love it dawg,
never stopped bustin choppas, id kill em all,
this game aint easy, i swear it aint,
if you doubt you could make it, i swear you cant,
***** come up behind you and take your wife,
then another one come up and take you life,
and you know what this is, its just the game,
it will never pause stop or even change.

lol lets battle it out:

yo you talk about the game like your in it
but writting forums on the internet doesnt mean ****
you talk about the hood like you been hit
so ill show you what its like with this gun kit

now i aint saying im in the game either man
but im a hell lot closer then this little fan
and ill kill you with these rhymes like i know i can

you talk about this rap **** like its unfamiliar
but when all it hits me man there nothin realer

man and im the only true rapper here
im the spitter that everybody in rap fear
cause alot of yall are still sounding like last year
the game needs change and im the mother ****ing cash-ere.

lets see what u got :P

lol i like the drake imitation at the end....

you a busta,
you never been hood,
you wanted too and you wish you could,
i like ya rhymes though, you have some potential,
but quoting other rappers is not essential,

you a rapper in the making,
i dont know about that,
my rhymes leave you shaking,
and you know its a fact,
dont play with the game,
it wont be fun,
cause all you do is lose, and you know it son,

i know i didnt do much and its not that good.....
your pretty good though man....

wow you think you really got me there?
you think that son?
i call you son cause im your father and not your mom
im the father of all the fake rappers and you are one

you make fun of me cause i immitate drake
man drake is the **** and you are the rake
picking him up admiring him checkin if hes fake

so next time you come around and call yourself the best
ill come in your hood shot you, better hope you got a bullet proof vest
cause im aiming at your chest

and ill hit your ribs
shattering them up into itty bitty bits
cause i kill you *****
so quit trying to beat me whith this rap ****

lol and btw your good to wanna help me out with a song?

Im not trying to beat you, i already won,
just give up already, you look foolish son,
think you can really beat me??
well play my game,
but since your gunna lose boy, dont be ashamed,
i am a king kid, i am the best,
i am a great rapper, forget the rest,
i wouldnt try to shoot me,
you need to respect my crew,
we shot many before, you'll get shot you too,
dont be afraid, its all good,
just dont come running up in my hood,
if you run up in here you will get hit,
sayin you will kill when you just aint ****,
got alot uh talk on ya when you just a *****,...........
............
now you think its all over but its just began,
its ok your a wanna be, or a drake fan,
just dont think you can rap, better than i can,
here let me change it up for ya, i got a new plan,

rapperindamaking, look at him he shaking,
he say he a rapper but we all know hes faking,
im not trying to bust him out, im just saying,
oh no, he look mad, i dont think hes playing,
but i dont care if he playing, hes nothing to me,
my raps are sick son, dont catch a disease,
your new to the game your like a planted seed,
dont worry you'll learn, and grow into a tree,
just never blow over and lose all your leaves,....
....
the funs almost over, but i will be back,
i hope i didnt make ya have a panic attack,.....

thanks man lol and sure ill help you with a rap. no problem.......

I thought I'd add some female touch into this, lol ...

Y'all talkin' Ghetto,
So let's Go,
Let Mrs. Molotova finish this shxt
Put flows a la Shakespova in it
Give me a beat & I'll kill it
U betta recognize I'm the realest
So lemme tell u What the deal is
I don't care how Y'all feelin',
I be the one comin' from the gutter
Say my Name & Bxtches start to stutter
Play my Game 'cuz snitches be like butter
Smooth to soothe the pain after the clutter
Bring me one of those hoes & I'mma shut her
Up like this is Miss Molotova but Uncut
Say whut ?
I kick it raw in the bxtt


PS: English is not my 1st language, so don't be too hard on me now ...

Never written a rap before, but here goes:

ya'll rappin bout guns
like shooting's the sh*t
carrying guns, it ain't fun
Weezy's locked up for it
forget the gangs and the fights
that ain't what rap is about
rap is sending ya anger straight out through ya mouth
so you DON'T pull the trigger when you get f*cked off
so you don't have to spend ya life runnin from cops
rap originated originally from the hood
but you don't need to be ghetto for your raps to be good

you right, i dont have to be hood for this,
but i am, and im not changing for ****,
just the way i am, and the way i gotta be,
you just cant imagine all the ****, that i seen
just a thug, thats the way people see me,

i just do what i do,
and not regret ****,
cause if you always regret, life can be a *****,
im cursin alot and i applogize for it,

makin moneys what i do,
hustle everyday,
thats the hood life,
its for me, but for some it isnt great,
ive tried to change, but every time its just a waste,
every time i come back to the same old thing,

i didnt have alot and its not too good sorry.. btw molotova and tracy you can two can rap good. this is fun keep it going lol............

Badder then Bad, I'm the Baddest

The Maddest, U can check my Status

And nothing comes gratis,

I earned this malice

'Cuz I'm just Ghetto Fabulous

But never blasphemous

Tho' I'm wicked like Tantalus

This bxtch is scandalous

& I ain't rappin' 'bout my Smith & Wesson

Just came back to teach y'all a lesson

My rhymes kill but nevertheless,

I'll give you some time to process

'TheBest' is not the best but better than 'RapperInTheMakin'

Of course my girl Molotova showing both you dudes up.
She knows about the rap battle sh*t.

I stopped reading because I didn't have enough time. But I ended with The Bests like amazing post, right before Molotova came in. And I'm just saying wow. You guys are good = ).

Originally Posted by Tyler6270

I stopped reading because I didn't have enough time. But I ended with The Bests like amazing post, right before Molotova came in. And I'm just saying wow. You guys are good = ).

You really have no idea about rap do you.

Lmao. If your so pro spit a rhyme dude. Wow us all.

Originally Posted by Tyler6270

Lmao. If your so pro spit a rhyme dude. Wow us all.

That's not a good idea ... He'll wow us 'til u wish u never asked !

Originally Posted by Molotova

That's not a good idea ... He'll wow us 'til u wish u never asked !

Possibly. But I doubt it. I never claimed to know anything about rap, but I know what thebest and rapperindamaking were doing was mainly just freestyle messing around, it's not like they were trying to make an Eminem song with a gigantic meaning. I don't know if he is trying to act web tough or if he is just a plan Jacka**, but either way, in my opinion he thinks too highly of himself.

Originally Posted by Tyler6270

Possibly. But I doubt it. I never claimed to know anything about rap, but I know what thebest and rapperindamaking were doing was mainly just freestyle messing around, it's not like they were trying to make an Eminem song with a gigantic meaning. I don't know if he is trying to act web tough or if he is just a plan Jacka**, but either way, in my opinion he thinks too highly of himself.

I don't think anything of myself
I just don't think highly of weak rhymes.

They really aren't that weak. It's freestyle anyway. He never said he was a great rapper or a freestyler, he does it for fun. But for freestyle his last one was pretty good.

Originally Posted by Tyler6270

They really aren't that weak. It's freestyle anyway. He never said he was a great rapper or a freestyler, he does it for fun. But for freestyle his last one was pretty good.

I seriously doubt this is freestyle.
And the last line isn't good lol

Its cool, everyone seems to be having a good and fun time except jeffs......buts thats alright jeffs is the serious one of the bunch. he likes to get people worked up talking sh*t .thats how he gets himself to feel better about himself, putting down others

Everyone all hyped up fightin and ****
They need to cool down bro stay calm
We don't need this here no one needs hit
I'm preachin but my own rhymes, no psalm

Too much hate goin on around in this place
Grittin teeth ready to strike in each other's face
Chill man don't be serious slow your pace
Take them out with words, use not your fists, use grace

We can take out the hate that isn't need here now
If you have been beat don't hate, leave and bow
No reason to get worked up and startin **** here
We can be friendly, help each other out and not be in fear

I'm just spittin my opinion in this bad rhyme
But I have to make it quick I'm low on time
I hope this reaches inside you guys and touches your cores
But whether you listen or not the choice is yours.