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    Default Emotional healing (a work in progress)

    This is a new one im working on, let me know what you think of what I have so far

    When your thoughts race
    And your pulse quickens
    And you sink to the floor
    Anxiety stricken
    Don't hide
    Take the time to analyze
    Look your inner being in the eye
    Dig to the root
    Ask yourself why

    Emotional healing
    Don't be scared of happiness
    So much opportunity in life
    But all so easy to miss

    This life is to learn
    So embrace desire
    Accept the whole
    Rise above and take control
    Take some time to explore your soul

    Find love for yourself
    Don't look for it from others
    Because there isn't room for them and you
    If you lean to hard
    You'll fall straight through
    So nurture yourself
    With love and attention
    Only you can provide that deep connection

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    Quote Originally Posted by nork View Post
    When your thoughts race
    And your pulse quickens
    dunno if it fits in with your idea for the tune but instead of that you could have
    when your thoughts race
    and your pulse increases pace
    sweet song btw

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    Quote Originally Posted by Carpe dium View Post
    dunno if it fits in with your idea for the tune but instead of that you could have
    when your thoughts race
    and your pulse increases pace
    sweet song btw
    Thanks, glad you like it. I like your line but I kinda like the rhyme between "quickens" and "stricken", but I dunno, do you think the "quickens" part sounds a bit silly?

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    na bro everything in your song is up to you i was just trying to give you some choices either way sounds great to me
    edit: and also could you look at my song shadow man? cheers

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