my rap

Originally Posted by Saybers Lyricals

You can take part in this
It really wont change a thing
Molotova's a queen
And Jeffs already become the king
But if you insist then ill oblige
Ryhmes so hot, they burn out your eyes
I know this isnt perfection
But you still git an erection
The moment you saw my lyrics
You knew they were a selection
Im the complete opposition
Of what you are like
Your a microcasm
Of what i am on the mic
I dont give a ****, i know your starstruck
I feel sorry for your mum
Sucked my **** and got her jaw stuck

Btw, I know that because you stole a few lines from it.
AND, you also spelled microcosm wrong.
Totally not-creative and unoriginal. :P I'm kiddin' dawg.

Yeah I know you did Molo, I was referring to how everyone else went straight back to dissing each other. That doesn't prove ****. If any of you want to become real lyricist, then send a message. Hating on people doesn't do **** for you.

If you want to prove to me how your a real 'g', then make me have an epiphany about life. Send me away with a greater message, a meaning, something I can relate to.

How does hating on people not do anything for you? Look where Eminem wound up. Thanks, Bye.

Originally Posted by Zachre

Yeah I know you did Molo, I was referring to how everyone else went straight back to dissing each other. That doesn't prove ****. If any of you want to become real lyricist, then send a message. Hating on people doesn't do **** for you.

If you want to prove to me how your a real 'g', then make me have an epiphany about life. Send me away with a greater message, a meaning, something I can relate to.

I have a couple messages here for you
First one says... "shut the **** up"
Second one says.. "You cant rap for **** and so your opinion means nothing

And then I'd just like to add that lyricism is NOT judged in ANY way by the content of your work, it is based purely on rhyme skill and flow. If you wanna go crack a boner over world peace and all that gay **** I'm sure you could spank one out to some Martin Luther King videos.

No one cares what you think or wants to prove themself to you. I dunno about the others but I'm not claiming to be a 'G'. Hate is one of the strongest feelings out there and is a PERFECT fuel for lyrics.

Why is this turning into such an angst thread? Relax and carry on rapping guys!

I agree with Jeffs, hate is a very strong emotion and it's a perfect fuel for lyrics. So is love though, u just gotta be full of it & have quite some skills, otherwise it's gonna end up sounding corny as fxck.

Originally Posted by 020Jeffs

I have a couple messages here for you
First one says... "shut the **** up"
Second one says.. "You cant rap for **** and so your opinion means nothing

And then I'd just like to add that lyricism is NOT judged in ANY way by the content of your work, it is based purely on rhyme skill and flow. If you wanna go crack a boner over world peace and all that gay **** I'm sure you could spank one out to some Martin Luther King videos.

No one cares what you think or wants to prove themself to you. I dunno about the others but I'm not claiming to be a 'G'. Hate is one of the strongest feelings out there and is a PERFECT fuel for lyrics.

Okay, first off lyricism is the expression of emotion in an imaginative way. Rapping about random **** is whats based on rhyme skill and flow. I think it's funny world peace is gay **** to you though hahah. You sound like a very educated person. But I'm not some world peace fanatic anyways, world peace isn't even possible. And I never said anyone cared what I thought or had to prove themselves. And Hate is a perfect fuel for lyrics, as are all of the other emotions. But hating on someone over the internet? Such a badass. And to avoid being contradictory, I'm not hating, I'm just giving my opinion. I mean I get the whole battle thing, it's amusing. I was just wanting to see if anyone had anything real to say. Not "You can't rap for ****, so we don't take you seriously". How naive is that? I'm sure I'll get a lot of arguments for all of this, but its whatever. I'm sure your a very successful person in life Jeffs

Haha, I like the Em relation and I definitely agree with where hate fuels writing. I pretty much use hate in ALL of my writing.
Oh, and Zachre kind of has a point.

Originally Posted by Zachre

Okay, first off lyricism is the expression of emotion in an imaginative way. Rapping about random **** is whats based on rhyme skill and flow. I think it's funny world peace is gay **** to you though hahah. You sound like a very educated person. But I'm not some world peace fanatic anyways, world peace isn't even possible. And I never said anyone cared what I thought or had to prove themselves. And Hate is a perfect fuel for lyrics, as are all of the other emotions. But hating on someone over the internet? Such a badass. And to avoid being contradictory, I'm not hating, I'm just giving my opinion. I mean I get the whole battle thing, it's amusing. I was just wanting to see if anyone had anything real to say. Not "You can't rap for ****, so we don't take you seriously". How naive is that? I'm sure I'll get a lot of arguments for all of this, but its whatever. I'm sure your a very successful person in life Jeffs

And GOOD rapping is the expression of emotion in an imaginative way mixed with rhyme skill and flow. Definition: If u're only good at telling stories, you should become a priest or something. If u just got rhyme skill and flow, you should become the second Lil' Wayne or whatever. If you got all of the above, come & battle me.

Please MOLO lmfao ......this sh*t cracks me up... one thing is you and jeffs are f*ckin posers with your antics about tellin ppl to shut the **** up like your so hard a** and in a gang or something and being confident is cool but being a Little B*tch and a d*ck with an attitude is immature...cause if you guys just had fun with it and not take sh*t so personally. Like I just see both of you sh*tting bricks because someone batttled you and got a couple of blows in on you.....motherF*ckers listen if ANY of us where as good as you two claim you are. For one...you would not be the f*ck in here and two you wouldn't care or try to run this B*tch like your lifes depended on it.....you act like your sh*t would fall a part if ppl don't give you props up to your standards. There are so many different styles and types and likes and dislikes in this world you two just need to calm the f*ck down and have fun with this sh*t you act like bad boy records or after math is up in here checkin your **** out lol

Who said I was planning on getting famous dxckhead ?
Even when it's for fun, I want lyrics to be decent, otherwise don't fxcking spit them.
I'm a cocky lil' bxtch because I can afford it, you on the other hand, got too much attitude for a guy with absolutely no skill or what so ever.
Come back when you know what u're talking about.

Originally Posted by Molotova

And GOOD rapping is the expression of emotion in an imaginative way mixed with rhyme skill and flow. Definition: If u're only good at telling stories, you should become a priest or something. If u just got rhyme skill and flow, you should become the second Lil' Wayne or whatever. If you got all of the above, come & battle me.

Haha, so fuсking true.
And gunsofarsenal, you just lost all respect I had for you. So now no one gives a fuсk about you, bitсh.

Originally Posted by Molotova

And GOOD rapping is the expression of emotion in an imaginative way mixed with rhyme skill and flow. Definition: If u're only good at telling stories, you should become a priest or something. If u just got rhyme skill and flow, you should become the second Lil' Wayne or whatever. If you got all of the above, come & battle me.

Exactly, which is why I said let's see who has something real. Because battles aren't GOOD rapping, its just kids finding more words that rhyme and are synonymous with "I'm Better" and "You Suck". And no one is really better than another, because we all have different styles. I mean, if you know your literature, there is Hemingway and Faulkner, two completely different styles, but both are famous for their work. One big reason lyricists become famous, is because their message and style is something a vast amount of people understand and relate to. It doesn't mean they are better than anyone else though. Also, in my opinion, Lil' Wayne is just a rapper with clever metaphors, while Eminem is a lyricist with a stronger message.

So, I'm not saying anyone has too, I just think it'd be cool if someone laid down something meaningful. But if you all just want to be *****es and hoes type of rappers, thats fine, continue on.

@ Zachre:

Oh but I ain't into Lil' Wayne, Eminem nor The Game
And I'm sorry for sayin', but it's y'all that I blame
For not listenin' when it comes to real hiphop shxt
Missin' the whole point and ain't no stoppin' it

This generation is facin' misplaced hate & frustration
Against elevated creations of the rap foundation
Never heard of the Fu-Schnickens kickin' it
And even if u did, you wouldn't be diggin' it

So lemme be nice & give yo' xss some advice
Next time think twice instead of writin' in a trice
Mesmerized by my lines, I give you royal rhymes
Memorize my designs, yet stay loyal to ya mind

Won't attack ya, here's a FB quote that I enjoyed
Give us back Pac and we'll send you Soldier Boy
But nowadays y'all get too wasted to retrace the base
Hiphop in ya face, brought with grace, I rest my case

Originally Posted by Newbie01

Haha, so fuсking true.
And gunsofarsenal, you just lost all respect I had for you. So now no one gives a fuсk about you, bitсh.

If I had cojones, I'd put 'em in gunsofarsenal's filthy mouth. TEABAG BXTCH ! Some nice fellatio for his New Jersey xss.
Mm mm mm !

I can understand not liking Lil'wayne or the game or any of them. But Eminem is the best known contemporary rapper (emphasis on known, because there may be some I don't know out there) And I would gladly give soulja boy for Pac. Pac had meaning. Soulja boy has a dance, and a beat. Just like most "Rappers" (Using that term loosely) today. I've never been a fan of that "A Bay bay" ****, I want the real deal. I'll throw a rhyme another time. I'm going to bed. Later

Originally Posted by Zachre

Okay, first off lyricism is the expression of emotion in an imaginative way. Rapping about random **** is whats based on rhyme skill and flow. I think it's funny world peace is gay **** to you though hahah. You sound like a very educated person. But I'm not some world peace fanatic anyways, world peace isn't even possible. And I never said anyone cared what I thought or had to prove themselves. And Hate is a perfect fuel for lyrics, as are all of the other emotions. But hating on someone over the internet? Such a badass. And to avoid being contradictory, I'm not hating, I'm just giving my opinion. I mean I get the whole battle thing, it's amusing. I was just wanting to see if anyone had anything real to say. Not "You can't rap for ****, so we don't take you seriously". How naive is that? I'm sure I'll get a lot of arguments for all of this, but its whatever. I'm sure your a very successful person in life Jeffs

Firstly, I have 3 A*s in Biology, Chemistry and Physics A levels, so don't question my success or intelligence.
Secondly, no one is hating on anyone, there are threads by some of us battle rappers that rap about emotions other than hate but in a thread dedicated to rap battle, other emotions wont help.
No one is being hated on, opinions are merely being expressed until some one thinks that they know better than everyone and tries to disagree with those opinions.
Thirdly, there is nothing naive about refusing to take serious the advice of a poor rapper, when the aforementioned advice is in fact advice about rapping. I wouldn't take flying lessons from a penguin if you catch my drift.

Originally Posted by 020Jeffs

Firstly, I have 3 A*s in Biology, Chemistry and Physics A levels, so don't question my success or intelligence.
Secondly, no one is hating on anyone, there are threads by some of us battle rappers that rap about emotions other than hate but in a thread dedicated to rap battle, other emotions wont help.
No one is being hated on, opinions are merely being expressed until some one thinks that they know better than everyone and tries to disagree with those opinions.
Thirdly, there is nothing naive about refusing to take serious the advice of a poor rapper, when the aforementioned advice is in fact advice about rapping. I wouldn't take flying lessons from a penguin if you catch my drift.

Go be a scientist haha. Also, all I was saying is lets see who has a real message, and not battle each other for a minute. And you don't know if I'm a poor rapper, I've barely rapped on here and when I did I didn't take it seriously because I was just messing around, like I previously stated, I don't like battling. And my 'advice' was send a real message instead of hating on people to prove to me your real. I was just giving my opinion that to me, content is a key component of skill. But you've set forth to establish yourself king on a little forum, and therefore everyone must be worse than you who posts on here right?

Originally Posted by Zachre

Go be a scientist haha. Also, all I was saying is lets see who has a real message, and not battle each other for a minute. And you don't know if I'm a poor rapper, I've barely rapped on here and when I did I didn't take it seriously because I was just messing around, like I previously stated, I don't like battling. And my 'advice' was send a real message instead of hating on people to prove to me your real. I was just giving my opinion that to me, content is a key component of skill. But you've set forth to establish yourself king on a little forum, and therefore everyone must be worse than you who posts on here right?

Dude, could you just, like, maybe, SHUT THE FUСK UP? Because truthfully, I'm getting tired of your crap. The crap that doesn't make sense. Or maybe it does, but I'm too lazy to read it because it doesn't mean anything. Like, to anyone. Yeah....

Originally Posted by Newbie01

Dude, could you just, like, maybe, SHUT THE FUСK UP? Because truthfully, I'm getting tired of your crap. The crap that doesn't make sense. Or maybe it does, but I'm too lazy to read it because it doesn't mean anything. Like, to anyone. Yeah....

How come you get to swear without the shxt gettin' censored ?