my rap

@Tyler

Lol im 14, Just thought this wud be fun to join in with lol

Il try one more 2moz prob

Yeah I have been using the advice you gave me, I went back to that topic from TheBest and Laughed at my comments. Haha, so blind ;P. You're pretty good bro, but now I have to go and sit for about nine hours trying to think of 16 bars to top yours haha. Lords of the Underground hmm.. I'll have to check them out man, thanks.

Originally Posted by Tyler6270

Yeah I have been using the advice you gave me, I went back to that topic from TheBest and Laughed at my comments. Haha, so blind ;P. You're pretty good bro, but now I have to go and sit for about nine hours trying to think of 16 bars to top yours haha. Lords of the Underground hmm.. I'll have to check them out man, thanks.

Listen to 'Chief Rocka' by 'Lords of the Underground
and 'True Fu Schnick' by 'The Fu Schnickens'

Just got listening to Chief Rocka, about to check out True Fu Shnick. Thanks for the help by the Way Jeff.

Originally Posted by Tyler6270

Just got listening to Chief Rocka, about to check out True Fu Shnick. Thanks for the help by the Way Jeff.

God dammit
it's Jeffs
with an S
First name Paul
Second name Jeffs

Lmaoooo. I honestly never even noticed the S. My bad bro. Thanks Jeffs

Originally Posted by davidwillson

And another thing, U say I gotta prove I'm the best with my rhymes, but I ain't waistin' my time spittin' good lyrics on a forum that anyone can get access to.

You don't actually believe you're the best with your rhymes do you lol? Also, don't spit the game if you can't walk to prove it bro.

Originally Posted by davidwillson

And another thing, U say I gotta prove I'm the best with my rhymes, but I ain't waistin' my time spittin' good lyrics on a forum that anyone can get access to.

Why are you quoting me ? I don't even know who you are, we never battled or anything, what the fxck ?

Originally Posted by LILAusty

you silly lil boy dont diss me me
cz you fail miserably
me and her rhyme brilliantly
not like your wack vocabulary
so go back to school
you fool
you look at our rhymes and druel
you think ya tough but you sound like a puff
with ya pink fluffy hand cuffs
haha
what you dont realise is
when you sipped ya coke and had a lil choke
a was in the next room giving ya mam a nice poke
so go back to having wanks
because your silly lyrics are pranks
your a silly girl
who makes girls hurl
am sat here now watching your mams pole twurl
molo tova has already ownd you
so rhyme better lyrics like you supposed to
you say its not the insults
kid go to sleep and leave this to the adults

I didn't read all your rhymes your right,
But that's cus if I did, I'd laugh my *** off all night.
So don't try and go act tough,
And don't try to play like you know your stuff.
I'm not even going to insult you,
its a waste of my time.
I'll treat you like an adult,
even though that was a kiddy rhyme.



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Originally Posted by davidwilsoon

i didn't read all your rhymes your right,
but that's cus if i did, i'd laugh my *** off all night.
So don't try and go act tough,
and don't try to play like you know your stuff.
I'm not even going to insult you,
its a waste of my time.
I'll treat you like an adult,
even though that was a kiddy rhyme.



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are
so
sh*t

Who is this davidwilson guy ? He didn't even write that himself, he's quoting it, I've read it in the beginning of this thread, forgot who posted it though.

Molotova you guys are scaring me off

Originally Posted by VivaPalestina

Molotova you guys are scaring me off

Hahaa, we'll be kind on you dear

That david guy is quoting your posts and mine Molo. I stopped posting because I got bored of it, I don't know what he is doing though. I might post again later.

Aayt Zachre, hope you rejoin the battle soon !

I will, just not in the mood lately haha.

Amaryn - Never dare Viva Guess who's going to have to stand on their head for sixteen hours?

Molotova - For you dear Never done this before so that you may know how dear you are

I'm not gonna diss you
Tell you you're sh*t
Cause you and I
Already know
What I truely think
But hear me out
Lemme speak
Dont disqualify what I say
Dont just turn a blind eye


Happy? Okay khalas I'm out

Originally Posted by VivaPalestina

Amaryn - Never dare Viva Guess who's going to have to stand on their head for sixteen hours?

Molotova - For you dear Never done this before so that you may know how dear you are

I'm not gonna diss you
Tell you you're sh*t
Cause you and I
Already know
What I truely think
But hear me out
Lemme speak
Dont disqualify what I say
Dont just turn a blind eye


Happy? Okay khalas I'm out

Not really a rap, but you're gettin' it started
It's not all that, but atleast you departed
I like your choice of words though it doesn't rhyme
Next time u try to write, Take ur time for each line

And U'll see, eventually, flows flow automatically
Treated preferentially, flows are systematically
I know U got enough soul to come Up with 8 bars
Zina, we are who we are, so show 'em all who's the Star !

Alright lets start things off real slow
I need something to check me into flow
So I'm going to start by saying I love you all
No hate is needed to make me look tall

I think its about time that we get real profound
The games are done, let's not mess around
Send your life message, all with a sound.
So lets put it down like we're in a pound.

Ladies first, Molotov's verse
If needed, rehearse. Its time we kick it in reverse, and submerse.

Zachre - nice!!

I'm so evil, I should be forbidden,
Rhymes primeval, but it's all hidden,
Take a look at everything I've written
And you'll see that I've been bitten

By a virus named conscience-smitten
The greatest bxtch in Great Britain
Viva Palestina, still got love for Palestine
I'm the Diva, consider me the Arab Frankenstein