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  1. Molotova's Avatar

    Molotova said:

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    Muahahahaha
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  2. VivaPalestina's Avatar

    VivaPalestina said:

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    Loved it! Beat that bro
  3. Newbie01's Avatar

    Newbie01 said:

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    WOW o.o I missed a SНITLOAD while I was gone.
    Last edited by Newbie01; 11-16-2010 at 05:28 PM.
  4. Zachre's Avatar

    Zachre said:

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    Alright, here I go, it's time to bring the pain
    Tonight, no fear I show, it's time to begin my reign.
    I fight, with a sick flow, not braggin I'm just sayin
    My sight, blind no mo, I'm no longer playin.

    I'll rattle your cage and awaken the beast.
    I'll battle with rage and make it decease.
    You shouldn't have done this, now I'm gonna unleash.
    You couldn't ever have run this, if I was on a sooner release.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zachre View Post
    Alright, here I go, it's time to bring the pain
    Tonight, no fear I show, it's time to begin my reign.
    I fight, with a sick flow, not braggin I'm just sayin
    My sight, blind no mo, I'm no longer playin.

    I'll rattle your cage and awaken the beast.
    I'll battle with rage and make it decease.
    You shouldn't have done this, now I'm gonna unleash.
    You couldn't ever have run this, if I was on a sooner release.
    Now these were 8 bars I enjoyed reading.
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    Zachre said:

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    Thanks Molo, I was bored hahah
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    Newbie01 said:

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    Fuсk it man, here I go:

    You bitсhes just found the beast in me
    I'll be shuttin' suckas down in groups of three
    You'll try to flee, but I'm just a bit faster
    You'll never escape you fuсkin' bastards

    Because I'm the damn master of this fuсked up world
    I stuck my diсk in the dirt until the whole Earth curled
    Up and never showed its beauty to nobody
    Ya'll are just waitin' for the day it unfurls

    But I hurled it like I was ballin'
    Which I always am, these shots I'm forever callin'
    I'm already at the finish line while ya'll fuсkin' stallin'
    There's a reason that I was standin' when everyone was fallin'
    Last edited by Newbie01; 11-17-2010 at 06:10 PM.
  8. Tyler6270 said:

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    The beast in you is the barbie inside of ken
    You can't act tough when your only the age of ten
    You can't shut down **** just the people in yo mind
    You can't beat anyone here, that fact you will find

    Why try to escape from a fate not to fear
    Sit down listen up so these words you can hear
    Your the master of nothing, sure as hell not this world
    I'm here to shut you down, and leave your head swirled

    The only thing you stuck your **** in lately is your palm
    It's obvious you use lipstick, we know it ain't lip balm
    Calm down chill out listen as I drop my bombs atomic
    By beat romps you and it's the rap games tonic

    War machine is on and its treads on da tracks
    Killin wannabe rappers onslaught to the max
    I'm done spankin you now in this rhyme little boy
    Get up, get game, come back, and don't be coy.
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    amaryn said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Molotova View Post
    You must've missed it, come in here dissin' the Misses
    Your flow sounds twisted, now sit & listen to the Mistress
    I'm not going to diss you like you tried to diss me
    Oh no, instead I let ur mind spin until you dizzy

    Let me lead this one, because I know how it's done
    I score lyrical home runs for fun, run after run
    So you wanna have a talk about generation X-box ?
    Fxck it, they're lost, but I'm like Molotova on the rocks

    Sip me, and I might relight your lines & redefine ya style
    Give you insight in the mind of mankind in this time
    It's ironic how electronics fxck up their mnemonics
    It's psychotic how their wishes are platonic, histrionic

    But who are we to judge ? Epoch 'unplugged'
    Rockin' iPods, slugs, drugs & thug love, uhuh
    No communication, the creation of gyration
    Rotatin' in vicious circles, ain't no salvation ...
    WOW,MOL! Viva enjoyed you trying to beat me,lol
    You don't know me yet, zulle
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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    WOW,MOL! Viva enjoyed you trying to beat me,lol
    You don't know me yet, zulle
    Hahaa, kom op dan !
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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    WOW,MOL! Viva enjoyed you trying to beat me,lol
    You don't know me yet, zulle
    And you dont know Mol yet
  12. Tyler6270 said:

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    Come in this place spittin rhymes thinkin they good
    You act tough over a keyboard, tryn to act hood
    Actin nothin like a gangsta, just like a damn fool
    No skill, no beat, your just an obsolete tool

    You compare your random lines to my bars
    My name up in the sky shinin like da stars
    Spittin my game ill like its everyday routine
    Gonna implode your mind, explode your voicebox, scream

    Your rhymes have no flow, check the facts
    You ain't any good, thats just the stats
    I run this place all day and night
    Your game ain't bad, but its far from ight

    This is my quick game just thought of in a minute
    You can probably spit one back, but you won't win it
    I'm done swishin threes though so take the ball
    I'll slow down my sprint so you can continue to crawl.
  13. LILAusty said:

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    Alright looka austys back
    so dont have a panic attack
    i see yous rappin but ive seen enough
    but there was some wiked stuff
    but i think its time to spice it up
    cz austys rhymes make this thread blowup
    my rhymes not to fast not to slow
    but either way i give a good show
    so listern up as i shine
    later you will be making an austy srine
    i cant be bruised or beatin
    im so hot you should turn down the heatin
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    Quote Originally Posted by LILAusty View Post
    Alright looka austys back
    so dont have a panic attack
    i see yous rappin but ive seen enough
    but there was some wiked stuff
    but i think its time to spice it up
    cz austys rhymes make this thread blowup
    my rhymes not to fast not to slow
    but either way i give a good show
    so listern up as i shine
    later you will be making an austy srine
    i cant be bruised or beatin
    im so hot you should turn down the heatin
    No one noticed you left
    The only reason to panic is that your rhymes are so appalling people will kill themselves.
    The only thing that needs to blow up is your bars, you're about 500 syllables short
    Your rhymes are too slow
  15. Tyler6270 said:

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    No one cares that lil austy is back
    I just hope now your balls have dropped to your sac
    You come in here actin like your rap is tough
    I can't stop laughin bro thats funny stuff

    The only reason this thread would blow up is suicide
    But for that action it would definitely be bonafide
    Your rap is stinkin the place up take it outside
    Rap was just bad this I won't to you confide

    Like Jeffs said your beat is just way to slow
    It's lacking skill, adversity and also flow
    You say your show is good when it's just incredibad
    Awh little Austy cryin now? I didn't mean to make him sad

    My words are like hurricane katrina destructive
    Build up from the worst, my beat is now constructive
    Your rap is just bad, everything good is just deductive
    You need to copy paste something so you look even a little productive.


    I can't write for **** lately =[
  16. VivaPalestina's Avatar

    VivaPalestina said:

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    Wake up guys
  17. Newbie01's Avatar

    Newbie01 said:

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    Heh, I've just been coming to this page and saying nothing. I'm all out o' rhymes.
  18. replo said:

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    yo , im mr.k im swaarve and im bling , i got a $20,000 ring , no one ever thought id make it in life , they thought id be in tear and strife , but in the end the opposite was true , i got a country house and a gold plate loooo, so if your a lady who fancies some fun , how about letting me pump you in the bum yea , (diffrent rapper) , this man said it was no suprise , if you dont no how we did it let us open you're eyes , confuse the wise , lets explane that smile ,........... yo hes mr.k and needless to say , (back to first rapper) , im playing lifes standerds and i want my way, (diffrent rapper) , yo hes mr.k and he aint no chuck , (first rapper) , i got were i am from talent and work now , (diffrent rapper) , so if like him you want to see success , here they advice that'll make you the best , happyness is easy to find , (first rapper) , all you need is a girl that'll take it from behind , (all rappers) , BALAMORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by replo View Post
    yo , im mr.k im swaarve and im bling , i got a $20,000 ring , no one ever thought id make it in life , they thought id be in tear and strife , but in the end the opposite was true , i got a country house and a gold plate loooo, so if your a lady who fancies some fun , how about letting me pump you in the bum yea , (diffrent rapper) , this man said it was no suprise , if you dont no how we did it let us open you're eyes , confuse the wise , lets explane that smile ,........... yo hes mr.k and needless to say , (back to first rapper) , im playing lifes standerds and i want my way, (diffrent rapper) , yo hes mr.k and he aint no chuck , (first rapper) , i got were i am from talent and work now , (diffrent rapper) , so if like him you want to see success , here they advice that'll make you the best , happyness is easy to find , (first rapper) , all you need is a girl that'll take it from behind , (all rappers) , BALAMORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    WOW. :l I didn't understand ANY of that. No offense (or lots of offense), but you SUCK. By the way, if I were you, I'd look up what a bar is on google.com.
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    my rhymes will blow your mind
    with every single verse and line
    i got no reason of being the best
    everytime i always beat the test
    im unstopable, incredible
    im beyond belief
    im commander and chief
    ill never back down
    al stand my ground and go around
    dont **** with me or il put ya down
    im pound for pound and come out victoriuose
    thats right its me im gloriuose
    now here i go spittin my flow
    i got lyrics that make you smile
    its me an my wiked *** style
    listen up al make it worth your while
    im like ponochio i never lie
    it was lil austy you were dominated by
    what av got its an adrenilin rush
    my lyrics is a bad *** its your lyrics they crush