Need to Rap:). anyone writes rap??

Hey there i'm vortex.. i love rap music and i made a few of my own songs.... but not in english!! Well two of my favorite rapers are Eminem and 2pac!! i would like something like 2pac's rap ore eminems rap!!!

this is where the problem starts when i try to write a rap song in english my brain gets completely blocked... So i was wondering if anyone would be so nice to write some for me..

I need a love song! about a guy that can't get this girl he loves because she loves another guy.... so on, and so on!!! I need: A slow intro (simply saying that he loves this girl ...), Verse1., Chours, Verse2., Chours, Verse3., Chours, and on the end just something small saying we will never be together! (or something like that)

Hi, in what language do you usually rap ?
I don't wanna write anyone's lyrics without getting paid, but if you make up a lyric of your own, and send it to me, I am willing to improve it, so you can use it on a beat.

well i'm from slovenia, so usualy my lyrics are in slovenian or serbian laneguage but my english is quite well to, i've tried rappin' in english and i want to improve it, i want to try a song on a beat... i'll write my own song and let you improve it.. but i need some time... i've never wrote in eglish before so i'll nedd some time... tomorow

As govorri malko Bulgarski, mi resbirishli Bulgarski ti ? Hahaa
Ti znaesh Lepa Brena ? As mnogo obicham Lepa Brena !
Ok, I'll give you some time, take all the time you want. If you want my email to send your lyrics, just send me a private message and I will give it to you.
Greetings from Belgium

hey i coulde write u a love rap in a week

Intro
He really loved that girl and worked hard to look right for her.

Verse 1
He got rejected
He asked the chick out three times
Even her dad requested
She go out with the nice guy
He never understood what she liked and thats why
She fell in love with a punk called "Ty Ty"
He turned to his passion
It was rap he fashioned
And it was forever lasting
And his money was rationed
But he saved someone
He stopped those fools that raped Music
Right before they pierced her soul with a gun
And she helped you out a little with some skill
You freestyled and went underground
But your sh** was for real

Chorus
Hey mister stay for another
'Cuz your too kind fo 'sho
And if you stay I wont bother
Leavin you alone (times 2)

Verse 2
He'd saved up enough money to get a real mic
But what he'd like was a woman, right
Not quite
Now he's obsessed
He said he's on a quest to test
His skill and never rest
And a woman to love is just a side affect
Then he started to work out
You could tell what he was all about
Revenge
No one would ever doubt
Rap was self proclaiming
He named himself Prince to the King
And brought forth his thugs who sucked at rhyming
And he said one thing "I've been lying"

Chorus

Verse 3
"Have you ever loved someone so much you could never be gay?"
"But then met someone so much better along the way?"
"Then what if your first love found someone else"
"and your second love is getting a bullet out of her chest"
Then you fight
You fight until your first love's love is dead
Then you'll be left
And she'll have to go for you instead
You grab your gun
And you grab your knife
But the one thing you left was your mic
When you get there your mad as can be
She was making out with some girl in the streets
Then she looks at you like she knows what you've been through
She taps the other girl and says Ty Ty i'll see you
Your heart shatters
You say "I loved you"
She blushes, flattered
But she still thinks it doesn't matter
Take a look at the other wh***
You withdraw your gun
Fire til' her body hits the floor

Chorus

Outro
She looks at you for the longest time
Then says, now we'll never be together

Michael Johnson (Big Mike)
Icejohnson.skill@gmail.com
Nov 7, 2010

wow.. thanks sorry that i didn't write back.. i was away for some time i'll try to make something out of this song thanks again i realy appreciate it

Okay, I decided to do this after all. The corniest shxt I ever wrote:


1st verse:

I knew from the start I wouldn't get to your heart
We are two worlds apart, and I find it so hard
To know that he lies by your side every night
I try to hide what's inside, but you read my eyes

Read my mind, and say: "Baby, it 'll be fine"
Take ur time, meanwhile I can stand in line
If I knew u'd be mine, I would wait 'til I die
I try to combine our styles and our lives

We'd have a transfusion, no more exclusion
Just imagine the fusion, no more seclusion
Let's call it our collusion, oh, it's a delusion
'Cuz I got to the conclusion it's all an illusion

Does he love you like I do ? Tell me the truth boo,
Does he respect the woman in you like I do ?
Can he give you all the things you deserve & earn ?
Does he live to please you or will he swerve & turn ?

CHORUS (u'll have to come up with one)

2nd verse:

Will he be by your side when times get rough ?
How deep is his love ? Can he provide you enough ?
And when you're hurt, is he able to heal you ?
Now is he just a flirt or does he really feel you ?

Does he make you smile when you're about to cry ?
Is he still in denial or does he treat you right ?
'Cuz I'm the type of guy that would hold you tight
Risk my life for my wife and show you paradise

It's crazy how the nice guy can never get the lady
There's no maybe, you will never carry my baby
U say I'm your best friend 'til the end & I pretend
to comprehend, ain't nothing left for me to append

Don't matter where u went, it's about where u're going
So wherever u're present, don't go without knowin'
My intention is not to be your friend, pay attention
Did I mention, I'd be the very best man, no pretension

CHORUS (u'll have to come up with one)

3d verse:

So whenever u receive this, u better believe it
I'm as deep as ur cleavage and I'm never leaving
But I'm bleeding 'cuz ur signals are misleading,
Without exceeding, You're the symbol of deceiving

And yet I can't forget, you get stuck in my head
I should go on instead, but I just can't go ahead
Without letting you know 'bout everything I just wrote
So let it get to you slow and I think u know u got my vote

It's just that I'm not sure that I can endure this pain
It's impure to remain friends, I assure you, babe
Time doesn't revert, and I wonder if it's worth all the hurt
I'd prefer to keep u in my world, an idea I can't exert

As I said before, even when I won't be here anymore
You'll deplore our story, but it's not meant to restore
And even when I'm leaving you'll feel me near you
Severe intrigues, in your dreams I seem to appear too

CHORUS (u'll have to come up with one)

wooooww... thank you both man thats awsome..... i could never write something like this in english... wow realy i can not tell you two how much i appreciate it, o my god i still can't belive it realy thanks i'll make the best of it :P

man i could never write something like this... realy I'd had to get my heart broken in 10 places, I would have to make a milion sad faces.. to write something like this THANKS AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN!!!

I have one more question, artist rights (copyright) can i record this songs?

Yeah, go ahead, knock yourself out ! And if u ever get famous, hey, remember Molotova.

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Molotova.. thanks i'll keep in mind to mention you in the song .. I won't forgeth the help

gunsofarsenal: i don't know i haven't tried yet.. sorry:/

sure u can record it as many times as u want