I Say I Believe

Hey everyone! I just wrote something up for my wife as an anniversary gift. Let me know what you think!

Walking through life outside my world,
I find myself standing alone.
I look up to find a new sign in the light,
Your face shining right through my front door,

And I say I believe,
I believe in you.

I’m spending my time hoping, praying,
To hear your voice sing on the phone,
Tell me you love me, that I’m still alive,
It’s OK, I can hurry on home.

Now I say I believe,
I believe in me.

There’s no faith in this world,
No exceeding demands,
No discouraging favor
Brought forth from their hands
To remove this from me,
Tear away from my heart
This unknown sense of hope.
No, it won’t fall apart.

No, I
Won’t walk away from you.
I won’t
Give into their regret.
No, I’ll
Fight ‘cause I know I’m right.
I won’t
Ever let you forget

I say I believe.

All critiques are welcome, whether they're positive or negative.

First, that's an ace idea for a gift. I once did an acoustic cover of Yellow Card's 'Life of a Salesman' to my dad for his 50th birthday, he really liked the idea, even if i suck at singing, lol.

I like the lyrics though, they're real nice things to say to your wife

Well, I'm only thirteen, but I think that's awesome!

I like it, it's great. I hope your wife likes it too.

Thanks a lot for the kind words. I really appreciate it!

Good job. Belated Happy Anniversary!