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• oh yea man I've already listened to your stuff a...

  Thread: Wordplay for Wow recording (2 Replies, 1,434 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  oh yea man I've already listened to your stuff a few times through. Very good stuff I really dig the emotion you put into it.
  i never realized how much work goes into actually recording it until...

• Wordplay for Wow recording

  Thread: Wordplay for Wow recording (2 Replies, 1,434 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  This is my first time to try to record. I'm doing it more-so in hopes of getting my lyrics and stuff I write noticed. More to come soon and hopefully some vast improving. I've never tried this before...

• Wordplay For Wow. Part 8

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. Part 8 (0 Replies, 1,244 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Tell me what you think
  
  The war is never won
  So I look forward to more battles
  If I could see the future
  They’d be living in my foreshadows
  When I do what I do
  I’m just too cashews for these...

• Yes thank you I will keep that in mind! Always...

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. Part 6. (5 Replies, 1,695 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Yes thank you I will keep that in mind! Always looking to improve.

• hahaha exactly. I agree 100% its just this...

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. Part 3. (4 Replies, 1,646 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  hahaha exactly. I agree 100% its just this feeling you get. I do more sober but for some reason I feel like I (Can) do more high!

• Wordplay For Wow. Part 7

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. Part 7 (0 Replies, 1,090 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Vision was once blurry but now I see it so much clearer
  The only one who can compete with me is in the mirror…
  Everyone else still better prepare though
  I’ve got that oh shit… stop and stare flow...

• Thank you! I'm just trying to improve. Anything...

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. Part 6. (5 Replies, 1,695 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Thank you! I'm just trying to improve. Anything anyone notices I will try to improve on.
  I enjoy finally getting some responses though!

• Yea haha it's usually spur of the moment type...

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. Part 3. (4 Replies, 1,646 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Yea haha it's usually spur of the moment type stuff and im high when I reference it alot haha.

• hahaha :) Thank you! Appreciate it.

  Thread: Be My Dollar. (Full Song) (2 Replies, 1,419 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  hahaha :)
  Thank you! Appreciate it.

• Wordplay For Wow. Part 6.

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. Part 6. (5 Replies, 1,695 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Hope you enjoy it. Check my other writings too! Looking for tips or feedback on any of it. Haven't received anything.
  
  The pad is my canvas, Watch my pen paint that
  You could catch me wearing a...

• Wordplay for Wow. Part 5.

  Thread: Wordplay for Wow. Part 5. (0 Replies, 1,138 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Any reviews would be nice.
  
  Vision was once blurry but now I see it so much clearer
  The only one who can beat me, is in the mirror…
  Everyone else better prepare though
  I’ve got that oh shit…...

• Nice rhymes

  Thread: one life, one chance (1 Replies, 1,116 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Nice rhymes

• Bad Girl

  Thread: Bad Girl (0 Replies, 1,319 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  They ask where did the good girls go,
  But the answer to this question I do not wish to know
  I only wish to have a bad girl
  To make me happy, and forget this mad world
  
  Such a mad world, But this...

• Wordplay For Wow. Part 4.

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. Part 4. (0 Replies, 1,276 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Any tips or comments?
  
  They say a picture is worth a thousand words
  Well have they seen the words in this hot flow?
  One of my words is worth a thousand pictures
  Painted by Pi-ca-sso
  Didn’t...

• High and Tight (lyrics)

  Thread: High and Tight (lyrics) (0 Replies, 1,368 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Tell me what you think.
  Check my other work too. I need feedback :)
  
  
  
  I’m running it forever, So athletic
  Old enough to know you are only as good as your work ethic
  Mary Jane stops all the...

• Thanks! And yea, I see what you mean. I noticed...

  Thread: One Last Kiss. (3 Replies, 1,924 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Thanks! And yea, I see what you mean. I noticed it but let it slide, this is one of my rare songs where I repeat alot but that's how it came out.

• Be Your Mario (Lyrics)

  Thread: Be Your Mario (Lyrics) (0 Replies, 1,081 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  I've got that Mario Power
  Like Princess your man is a Bowser
  A no fun-allower
  ***** I just entered the building, high, top of the tower
  1 man show, You'll know why when you see me
  I said 1 man...

• Anything? Advice? Comments?

  Thread: One Last Kiss. (3 Replies, 1,924 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Anything? Advice? Comments?

• Be My Dollar. (Full Song)

  Thread: Be My Dollar. (Full Song) (2 Replies, 1,419 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Lyrics:
  
  I write from the heart, Organize it with my head
  They say that the best things in life are left unsaid
  So here I am to write them, In hope that she will like them
  Different from the...

• Wordplay For Wow. Part 3.

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. Part 3. (4 Replies, 1,646 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  3rd in a series. Tell me what you think. Check my other work too! It's similar.
  
  As I wonder what my future holds I try to remain calm
  I don't want to choose the wrong hand and get an open palm...

• If you want my opinion you are using lines that...

  Thread: rap lyrics to a dirty south, new ageish heavey bass intsrumental (1 Replies, 1,484 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  If you want my opinion you are using lines that are kind've like "been there.... heard that...." meaning nothing really pops out and wows :(
  It is good rhymes, good layout, some multi syllables I...

• Wordplay For Wow.Part 2.

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow.Part 2. (0 Replies, 1,231 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  I am so gone and nobody said bye to me
  Sitting on cloud nine alone, nobody’s as high as me
  Not one enemy, I love everything, except sobriety
  Check the dictionary, Scary, There is no definin' me,...

• Wyatt Earp ...

  Thread: Fly Over You (Punchline Song) (2 Replies, 1,667 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Wyatt Earp
  
  http://www.wyattearp.net/Wyattearp1.jpg

• Hook explanation ...

  Thread: Fly Over You (Punchline Song) (2 Replies, 1,667 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Hook explanation
  
  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=INK-Pr6Z82A
  
  ;)

• Fly Over You (Punchline Song)

  Thread: Fly Over You (Punchline Song) (2 Replies, 1,667 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Flip the light switch up, Because I’m so on
  Never say bye to Mary, but we’re always gone
  Pen making the transformation to a magic wand
  Now I’m writing things like magic, Turned hobby into habit...

• Nice right on.

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. (5 Replies, 1,841 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Nice right on.

• Thanks though! Good to know someone likes this.

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. (5 Replies, 1,841 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Thanks though! Good to know someone likes this.

• nahh I have just written alot for a while. I...

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. (5 Replies, 1,841 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  nahh I have just written alot for a while.
  I like to write stuff like this for fun but I like poetry and writing song lyrics.

• Nice stuff! Especially for freestyling. Props.

  Thread: Verbal Needs (11 Replies, 2,222 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Nice stuff!
  Especially for freestyling. Props.

• Wordplay For Wow.

  Thread: Wordplay For Wow. (5 Replies, 1,841 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Different approaches with the pen,
  Watch me flip it into battle mode
  Always staying stoned, like a gravel road
  Try to speed over me and I will pop up and shatter your perception
  I write it to...

• One Last Kiss.

  Thread: One Last Kiss. (3 Replies, 1,924 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  I try not to live in the past, But I can’t get past this…
  I’m caught on an action, That temporary satisfaction
  That caused this lasting reaction
  We were 2, Me and You, But along the way we met...

• Homegrown Lyrics

  Thread: Homegrown Lyrics (0 Replies, 1,707 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Tell me what you think:
  
  Sold after one punchline I no longer have to sell it
  I'm not one for beef, If you try, I taco-bell it
  It's hammer-time, you all know that I can nail it
  This isn't...

• thanks man thanks anything that stands out? Good...

  Thread: No chorus just punchlines and verses (2 Replies, 2,493 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  thanks man thanks anything that stands out?
  Good or bad?

• No chorus just punchlines and verses

  Thread: No chorus just punchlines and verses (2 Replies, 2,493 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  The focus is on jokes and punchlines:
  
  .4 left and I'm like Derek Fisher, it's never over man
  So high now I philosophize, the weed let's me overstand
  Cause there's no time to be under like the...

• New to the site but here's a sample

  Thread: New to the site but here's a sample (0 Replies, 1,362 Views) by JStokes23

  
  

  Tell me what you think I have a bunch of verses and stuff. Here's a sample:
  
  Sleep is for the weak or that’s how they make it seem
  So how the **** am I supposed to embrace my dreams?
  They say...