R3gr3t

This song was mainly a poem but it turned out to have a melody to it when I wrote it on paper xD

[intro]
you thought I was playing, you thought I told you a LIE. But when I told you I'm not "just 'sayin"' you turned into an emotional type o' guy. And I knooow you dropped dead, when I left. I come back- then you ignore me as if I, NEVER EXISTED

[rap/melody part, sung fastly and with an English accent]

Wellllllll~ sorry for bothering you, Oh!
I forgot to give you this love, Note!
Since you don't seem to "give a care", Now!
(and you seemed to have moved onnnn..)

[guitar plays, similar to Fallout Boy: Dance Dance]

[chorus]
I R3GR3T, giving you all my LOVE, and SECRETS.
And sharing my life with YOU! R3GR3T, hurting myself, instead of YOU.
(Run away!) From things that make you so glad.
(You keep it cool.) and stay by the things that make you sad!
(Introvert!) come out and play with, me. And see. How~ misery loves ye

[verse]
(attack!) when least expected.
(like that!) I knew things weren't "alright"
Your full of crap (slashed my heart and wrecked it)
I Knew that they seemed something Alike..

[fast rap/melody part again]
welllllll~ sorry for making your life JOY.
Forgot you weren't "that" kinda BOY,
Because your sorrow and you always complain about things..

[guitar plays]

[chorus]
(yes!) I R3GR3T, giving you all my LOVE, and SECRETS.
And sharing my life with YOU! R3GR3T, hurting myself, instead of YOU.
(Run away!) From things that make you so glad.
(You keep it cool.) and stay by the things that make you sad!
(Introvert!) come out and play with, me. And see. How~ misery loves ye

[sad piano intrudes..]

[verse]
I could never quite "get" you, at all..
And enough with despair, you'll get nowhere if there..
And I'm through with deny, and all of the lies.
Today... The feeling, is somewhat new, and something like, you...

[chorus played differently, softly, with a different melody]
I R3GR3T, giving you all.. My hope... Through secrets, to sharing my life with- you..
R3GR3T, constantly.. Remembering.. You.

Please, by all means comment and tell me of you liked it or not
Feel free to private message me and ask about the song cause I'd be happy to explain why cause it's simple(I-I guess I could say that o_o").
Thank you for your time.

I voted in this but I lied


also I voted before reading it properly as well and I thought this was about a pop song not a song yu had written

....soooooooo?..

What did yu think? LoL it was my second song so... You know... Idk...