You Saved Me (My speedwriting was put to work)

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  1. ShadowLeeSharp's Avatar

    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    Okay so, let's turn the page into the graceful atmosphere.
    I was blinded,*
    because I thought that you were never here.
    Ohhhhh, take a deep breath. And open your dear eyes.*
    So now that *you can finally see,
    *I hope that you can realize!

    every god giving day, *I solemnly pray.
    That I might may,*
    Find the light in every graceful way.
    Past through the milky way
    I'll pray away in the bed I lay.
    In this bed I lay.

    Okay so, let's read this book that seems sort of
    Confusing, though the stories are amusing.
    Almost like true tall tales in my eyes.
    But now that I'm older n smarter, life gets sort of harder.
    Now I understand every word i will shout.
    All my fears and all my doubts,
    I'm free..
    I have a feeling you saved me...

    Now I look at all my past,
    I'm finally freeee at last.
    My heart feels like it's a different mood.
    Believing in you.
    Saved me from swallowing myself in sick atmosphere.
    Hoarding my thoughts but now that you here.
    Not a care in the world,
    I have not a care in world.

    every god giving day, *I solemnly pray.
    That I might may,*
    Find the light in every graceful way.
    Past through the milky way
    I'll pray away in the bed I lay.
    In this bed I lay.
    N every god given moment,
    I'll pray that my opponent,
    Wong come in my way, in this kingdom I stay.
    I'll solemnly pray that I might may,
    Find the light, in every graceful way.
    You've saved my life,
    You've saved my day.

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    Hey I wrote this in like, what? A few minutes! so I won't mind if your harsh on me ^^ My mind is finally letting me think straight
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Love it!! See, rush job's are the best It's got such good flow and a lovely sentiment. Back on track, are we?
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
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    Ikr I'm awesome at speedwriting. N yeah! I'm so happy I think I just needed a break from writing now I'm back, like a few months ago I was writing like tomorrow hell was coming xD hahaha guess who's backkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk ehehe ;3
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Shadow my friend, in all seriousness, from Day One I've had great admiration for your free-flowing creative mind, unbridled and unrestrained by all the typical conventions, and this wonderful little speed-writing piece just proves it even more
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    I've always looked up to you in writing moon. Yes from the day I signed up on ATL the first two people I viewed were you and LyricsAngel
    So from that day you and Angel were the ones I always wanted to impress yes it's the truth thank yeww Moonie im always happy when you read my lyrixx hehehe n my speedwriting can't TOUCH your lyrixx! Your lyrixx are like, BEAST xD !!!
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-