I'm Written In The Stars

I'm Written In The Stars :

The sun beats down on the sand
As i see you walking by
There's rhythm in my feet
And i know I'm looking fine
Something about your indifferent look
Tells me that you like what you see
You think you can hide that second gaze?
You think you can fool me?
Well you better check your horoscope
'Cos I'm written in the stars

The clouds cast shadows on the sea
As I catch up with you
I splash you like I just don't care
And you splash me too
I can tell by how you push me away
That you love me hanging around
Was that a smile that I just saw?
Aren't you glad at the luck you've found?
Tonight you're gonna see
That I'm written in the stars

The moon shines down on the rocks
As I pester you once more
I get so much encouragement
When you tell me that I'm a bore
I can see by the way that you cross your arms
That you want me to stay
Did I just catch you lick your lips?
Do you want your wicked way?
Lie back, look up, didnt I tell you
That I'm written in the stars

Hmmm. Interesting post. I like it.

Nice!

This was good, I like it! I like the way it flowed together very smooth, yet you can almost sense the emotion--Great Job!

Hmmmm... intruiging, I like them, very clever! The imagery is very clear, you can feel yourself being there, and I like the power of suggestion within those lyrics, very clever and I like the way that you link back to your first verse very nice, sticking to the theme and giving it closure! They're very good!