_SBU -vs- AyeYoItsKarma

Originally Posted by _SBU

Telling me to "blow the nose"? ..when blows are thrown you're comatose,
A focussed pro; I owned the posts. you overdosed;
I'm potent dope like 'polar' snow ..so..
I draw metal.. most corrode.

Straightjacket rap style... due 'props' for "insane",
you're envying my "sword" like you gotta switch blade.
I've clashed with assassins, if pigs stop I'm fed narcs
so "tragic" like ham lit and prints got ya den marked.


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~potent dope- clean like polar snow..
+polar(-magnetic).. so.. draw metal (/pull a weapon)

~gotta switchblade/ gotta switch blade= got a smaller sword/ got to swap swords.

~'fed'/narcs (police/pigs) so 'ham' lit/ cooked
+hamlet- (tragedy) 'prince' of 'Den'mark'.
+prints got ya den marked.. ref: 'assassins'.

I'm not one for double meanings and confusing ****
But you called me out, so ill come through like Ruth in the pit.
I'm still stewin this, no ruining this. Ill intruder wish.
Keep my switchblade, and still catch me a fish.
Castin' the abyss, I've been known to sink ships
And rain on parades, I've been known ta link tips.
My ink tip touches the page, majestically magical
I'm protestingly practical. And actively tactical.

Ruth in the pit/ "babe" Ruth...pit=batters box
Intruder wish....intrude "your" wish
"Keep my switchblade" hah ain't lookin for a trade
Fish = you
Castin' ...... cast "in"
abyss/ ocean. Often reffer to my game being an ocean
Link tips... pretty straight forward
Ink tip.... a pen
"Magestically magical" "protestingly practical" and "actively tactical" all alliteration.
And "practical" and "...tactical" = double alliteration

you can't catch lyrics.. I was deep,
you can't "catch fish" if lines are weak..
you "sink ships" bruv? ..maybe so
I bring it up like davy jones.

you sink ships bruv? with this stuff so basic?
I'm complex like morality of sinking ships with slaves in.

"nikki ****ing k" you're simply fronting mate,
like you're scripts be something great when your ink leaks dullest gray.
you could bore the minds of undead and you falsify the subjects
whilst my awesome shine's like autumn skies at sunset.

Originally Posted by _SBU

you can't catch lyrics.. I was deep,
you can't "catch fish" if lines are weak..
you "sink ships" bruv? ..maybe so
I bring it up like davy jones.
"nikki ****ing k" you're simply fronting mate,
like you're scripts be something great when your ink leaks dullest gray.
you could bore the minds of undead and you falsify the subjects
whilst my awesome shine's like autumn skies at sunset.

Defeat. I'm brand new to this ****. Fun ta battle someone who can spit legit. Make me wana get better mang

Originally Posted by smoothtung

Defeat. I'm brand new to this ****. Fun ta battle someone who can spit legit. Make me wana get better mang

But **** it I kick buckets, cause ruckus, and cut ties
Haha autumn sky... I'm wild fire til I die.
Now rise, listen this ain't no Walt Disney
Davy died with his ship, flood out his kidneys
Did you say you're complex? Basic. Face it.
I'm complex with advice for lines in my rhymes so take it.
I'm spaceship. youre makeshift facelift or fake tit
I make hits you bunt *****, strikeout with an off-pitch

Originally Posted by _SBU

My rhymes ignite hottest, like- if the "lights off" it'S..
Cayenne Deep in ya missing 'i's socket.
Sk'n 'deep'? ..six feet, forcefed insecticide.
I'mma big league blitzkrieg all them defensive lines.
"tag your it"?? ..sh*t, that was child's talk.
I'mma tag over yours though, like I'm Cap from Stylewars.
why not sign off? "peace love empathy".
Im a wolf, these sheep come endlessly.

You? the hottest? HA HA. That's funny dawg ..don't make me laugh...
SBU your Lukewarm save that *hit for baby baths.
Just being honest,You couldn't move me if you were Luke using the force.
Sk'ns too hot for your Optics,dropping bombs like nuclear wars.
Your a novice G Bury me, you best awake and apologize.
Spray me with Insecticide!! No need I'll ingest it alive, Just for the high.
I believe in shooting lyrical missiles from the hip *uck packing a pistil.
Naw. Just giving you ****. Blowing up spots like a sack full of bad Krystal's...

I have an advanced depth.. rap at the art fests..
you can't rest like you camper and past 'tense'.
if you're forum rap champ that's a fantasy life,
if I'm "funny dawg" like brian, you're a family guy.
(so "baby bath"s true.. "made me laugh" too)
you're married with a wife and kid, your appetite as writer slipped-
a 'peaceful bloke' with 'evil prose' who needs to know that neither fit.
I won't mention ya tracks coz I'm better than that
but I've cleverer raps that are relevant, and.. sorry but no- we can never collab.

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EDIT:
Ey smoothtung: Respect due. I like your attitude and your style is good, solid poly rhymes, flips and some creativity. ambitious. more potential though, so go for it mate. keep putting in work.

Sk'n: always good to hear from you. aight I switched up and swapped out wordplay for force with some of this one. take that as a compliment. haha.

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~camper = effeminate ..or.. to ref: fest[ival] ..so..
triple meaning:
~past tense = he's history/ old/ over and done with.
~past tense = beyond nervous. ref: can't rest.
~past tents = 'camper's 'cant rest' when past tents. obviously.

Thanks dawg. Ima keep at it. you two were bringing some heeeat . Kept me goin

damn.. SBU nice... I'll get you back when I get the time. soon I hope.

Sbu You hit me hard with that one. lol this ones for you. And as allways no disrespct to you and none taken....

Now now SBU there’s no need to be a *ick prick.
You with Advanced depth? yeah...maybe when wearing lip stick.
Just Causes I'm a family man don't think I won't get Ballistic!
I Rip*hit, You like leaving lip prints on Brian's dip stick!.
That wasn't very nice dragging in my Family Guy!
vicariously living through my window? *uck it..let him fantasize.
couldn’t rise to the occasion on Viagra or in your case Spanish fly!
sorry I don't collab with *ussy's I leave em damaged over night and bandaged tight.

I "wear lipstick" on my bare d!ck tip- where gifted by ya blushing niece.
so 'f*ck skindeep' and 'f*cks kin deep'.
I'll crush his dreams if coming clean..;
your sole role's old and done with, please..
if you love 'em leave and just retreat,
crawl off to the rubbish heap.

maybe in youth you were ruthlessly dope,
now you uselessly hope for what used to be so.

Originally Posted by _SBU

I "wear lipstick" on my bare d!ck tip- where gifted by ya blushing niece.
so 'f*ck skindeep' and 'f*cks kin deep'.
I'll crush his dreams if coming clean..;
your sole role's old and done with, please..
if you love 'em leave and just retreat,
crawl off to the rubbish heap.

maybe in youth you were ruthlessly dope,
now you uselessly hope for what used to be so.

maybeThis line hurt the worst. lol
in youth you were ruthlessly dope,
now you uselessly hope for what used to be so.

Nice one SBU....Back at ya...


My Niece is 19 and requires I guy with a Bens.
Your a guy with no ride riding around on a Schwinn.
What nothing original you can think of on a whim?
why don't you find some Fluoride and wire brush that grin!!!
scrub off the incrusted scum crunch a munch tea and crumpets.
rummaged through your heap of rubbish above and still see nothing.
Keep it coming Retreat never. I'm Forever rapping,Old and decrepit with a cane.
I'd still emcee better. Even after a massive stroke to the brain.