Help

Verseone:
I lit the cigarette which laid loosely on my lips.
With each inhale; I exhaled a memory of you.

My body was shaking cold,
the day you left me on my own.

Now all I have are distant thoughts and memories.




Chorus:
Its easy to remember but even harder to forget.
These days I live in silence will only bring me regret.
And as I pace these hallow walls,
I know your laughing to yourself.
Maybe, your not the only one who needs a little help.

Verse 2:
I dug into my skin with the only knife around.
I was searching for something that could never be found.

And I cursed your very name for never listening to me.
And I bled and watched the hourglass tick until it screamed.

Now all I have is these hopeless ****ing memories.

Chorus:
Its easy to remember but even harder to forget.
These days I live in silence will only bring me regret.
And as I pace these hallow walls,
I know your laughing to yourself.
Maybe, your not the only one who needs a little help.

I love the chorus and the imagery in it, really paints a picture in my mind.

You haven't written a song titled,"A Hard Day's Night" by any chance?

Yeah she has written that song.

I knew it!!!!!

Shes an amazing writer isn't she?

A regular Lennon/McCartney!!!!!!!!!

aw, you guys are too flattering :-)

Shes almost as good as me but not quite....

She's better than me,that's for sure!

Thank you, Douuugggg.

She wrote this when she was 5 that's how amazing she is at writing. You should see her new stuff its too good for the internet. One time she tried posting one of her new songs that it caused the computer to blow up.

^ true story. now i use an electric type writer.

You've gotta be good to have movies named after your songs!

I know, right? That flattered me, too. ;-)

20 Likes,so far!I didn't know your song lyrics were so.......likable!!!!I'll keep on liking,if you keep on writing!!!

not planning on stopping anytime soon, just need inspiration!

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

A regular Lennon/McCartney!!!!!!!!!

"Help, she doesn't need somebody" Is that also hers in this case,lol?

Traingirl: Very strong lines in this one "dug into my skin with the only knife around", "as I pace these hallow walls"...
You certainly have an excellent command of the language and that's me saying that (a foreigner,lol )

Haha thank you. This was written in a really low point in my life. And its an old one!