Try

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  1. Thatsmeonthetrain's Avatar

    Thatsmeonthetrain said:

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    Verse one:
    These trying times, call for dying joy.
    And these hardships we face, chill us with disgrace;
    Leading us to the end of the cliff.

    These broken roads, can't repair on their own.
    And this house can't be a home.
    Unless you pick up and go, where the wind leads you.

    Chorus:
    Try, try just a little bit.
    Find the broken bits;
    and put them together again.
    Try, try a little harder now.
    Dust your heart off;
    and put it together again.

    Verse two:
    These happy times, awake when you feel alive.
    And these memories that fade, will all fly away;
    leading us to the other side.

    These days of pure high, make us wonder why.
    And this feeling we get, will no longer quit.
    But be standing by our side.

    Chorus:
    Try, try just a little bit.
    Find the broken bits;
    and put them together again.
    Try, try a little harder now.
    Dust your heart off;
    and put it together again.
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Traingirl,
    You're back on track!!At first I thought you may be paying tribute to Janis Joplin(whose birthday is a Thread by Smoothtung on this very site)She's had a song called Try(Just a Little Bit Harder)and while making sure I wasn't mistaking I found Pink also has a track called Try."These Trying Times"would be my suggestion if you do change the song's Title.By the way,I love this piece!I sometimes forget that folks name their songs after others they may not be familiar with,it's hard finding good Song Titles!
     
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    WishinOnAStar said:

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    i love this!!
     
  4. amaryn's Avatar

    amaryn said:

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    Always loved the Kosmic Blues of Janis , it's been yelling here through the apartment on many a day. Traingirl, here again you came up with a diamond line:

    "dust your heart off
    and put it together again"


    LOVE IT!
     
  5. WishinOnAStar's Avatar

    WishinOnAStar said:

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    i agree i really like that line
     
  6. Thatsmeonthetrain's Avatar

    Thatsmeonthetrain said:

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    Thank you both a bunch! I love getting compared to Janis. She's one of my biggest inspirations. <3