Grow Up, Be Brave

https://soundcloud.com/0point0zero0/grow-up-be-brave

(Verse 1)
Girl you make me sick, sick, sick
Your checkered Vans put holes in plans that stitches cannot fix
And I've tried so hard to rid myself of you
Monogamy and apathy won't let me follow through

That kiss on your lips was predisposition to the scene
Of boy meets girl, his hopes he hurls into her small town dreams
Well that show plays on, that perpetual song of complacency
That ball and chain just calls his name to rinse and rinse repeat

(Chorus)
Grow up, be brave
Don't let this world drive you insane but
I know it gets the better of us but
Don't let it get the better of ya
Grow up, be brave
Don't let this world drive you insane but
I know it gets the better of us but
Don't let it get the better of ya

(Verse 2)
Boy you're such a lonely man
Your hopes and fears you drown in beers, you kill it by the can
And I've tried so hard to tell you about the truth
I won't take sides on ways of life, but yours has got to go

That sip past your lips was predisposition to the scene
Of boy meets world his pride he hurls into his bathroom sink
But you're not convinced that you are sick, twelve steps don't make a man
Your failures ring resounding dings of head stuck in the sand

(Chorus)
Grow up, be brave
Don't let this world drive you insane but
I know it gets the better of us but
Don't let it get the better of ya

Grow up, be brave
Don't let this world drive you insane but
I know it gets the better of us but
Don't let it get the better of ya

I really like it! You have a very nice voice. It's pretty catchy

Originally Posted by RickeyJoe

I like the lyrics okay but it's just too poppy for my tastes. Let that not discourage you one bit because all of the machinations of talent are here. Your voice indeed is fitting. The lyrics are superb and the flow and scale is excellent as well. Again, just not my taste in music.

I'm glad your honest, though! It means a lot. Thanks for the compliments!

Messy words, Pointzero, with a lot of potential in the chorus and the title.
Not my taste either, but there are 1000 songs and 20000 different opinions,lol, so don't let it beat you down