I Can't Keep Holding On

Thread: I Can't Keep Holding On

Tags: None
  1. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

    Default I Can't Keep Holding On

    How could you stand there as your family falls apart
    How could you stand there in the dark
    Who are you?
    You foolish fool
    Where is your soul?
    How did you lose control
    "Chorus"
    Make a decision, make it quick
    Figure out who you want
    Take your pick
    Is it me, is it her
    I'm about to loose control
    I'm about to loose control
    I can't keep holding on
    To what's not there


    Gods given me these few days
    Figure out which way
    leave your family
    Or will you stay
    Figure out what to say
    To your children
    When you leave
    Will they understand your plea?
    "Chorus"
    Make a decision, make it quick
    Figure out who you want
    Take your pick
    Is it me, is it her
    I'm about to loose control
    I'm about to loose control
    I can't keep holding on
    To what's not there
    "Bridge"
    I'm tired of playing games
    You keep tearing my heart away
    And I can't seem to let this go
    Because you have totally lost control
    You may be clean you may be sober
    But that don't mean you can't be pulled over
    By God that's standing over your shoulder
    Think fast think fast this choice could be your last
    "Chorus"
    Make a decision, make it quick
    Figure out who you want
    Take your pick
    Is it me, is it her
    I'm about to loose control
    I'm about to loose control
    I can't keep holding on
    To what's not there
    I can't keep holding on
    To what's not there
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  2. orsen said:

    Default

    Some great lines in this, should'nt be overlooked. I wish I had the sound of the music going through John's head when he wrote this, I would appreciate it more I bet.
     
  3. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

    Default

    Thank you so much for commenting, and to answer your question I honestly don't remember what the music or rhythm that went through my head when I wrote this it was without a doubt a fast tempo but other than that I'm not sure. I'm hoping I can come up with some music for it.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  4. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

    Default

    John,you must be honored!Two of your threads have the Spam attack on them!Watch...they'll delete this reply and leave the Spam!