Cry Alone, song I wrote!

Song:Cry Alone

I wish
someone
was here to under-
stand what
I am
going through

But no one seems to notice

When you
laugh you
laugh with every-
one when
you cry
you cry

all alone, and no one knows

(chorus)

I am Lonely
I an Bored
I am tired
and torn
but you dont know what its like
spending Saturday nights all alone
I am gone
I am scared
I am wishing you were here
to help me get along
but no one does
I
cry alone
(end of chorus)

They say
it will
get better
in time
when your
you are older

But I can't wait, for forever to come

I am
searching
also break-
ing form
all the pressure

but it's still pushing, not even receding

(chorus)

(bridge)
it's sinking
deeper
under my'
skin
just give me
a pill

to take it all away

(chorus)

When you
laugh you
laugh with every-
one when
you cry
you cry
all alone

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Thanks for reading my song. I am thirteen, but judge hard! also i would geatly appreciate it if you looked at my other songs.

Ok, I rated this song "Ok, it wasn't bad or good" because I feel that you could expand on this and make it an insanely greater song.

Also, I can't find a beat for it.
Anyway, I think you should spend more time on this song.
It has potential.

Good luck

-TK