Summertime

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  1. Klukoklai said:

    Default Summertime

    stretched out in
    a canvas chair.
    eyelids pierced
    by yellow air.
    There is nothing
    standing in my way.
    there is noone here
    to harm and pain.

    crumpled up in
    moisture gras.
    listening in, between
    rusten fence and summergreen.
    lying dead
    with a world on pause.
    there is nothing here
    to change my course

    this is my summertime poem, I hate the winter in Wales.
    Look! My mouth is a fountain!
     
  2. LaphiTaphi said:

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    I like it, it's simple but gets the point across. Great job :-)
     
  3. Klukoklai said:

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    thx mate.
    Look! My mouth is a fountain!