MOST DAY"S tell me what u think

MOST DAY"S

most days spent thinking about you

sometimes i pretend i'm better off without you

i like remembering things we used to do

then thinking theres nothing left i hold my breath till i turn blue

i find myself guessing what wasnt and was true

on the outside i lie and say i don't care cause i'm through

/i miss you i'm falling apart your voice saying what you don't mean hate bleeding hurtful words your saying degrating games that your playing then when the hitting and screaming is through i got nothing better to do then sit around and wonder why i love you/

most day's spent acting like you ment it when you said together forever

sometimes i say i hate that we were ever

i close my eyes then open them hoping its you i see

i lie and say i'm happy i'm free

i still keep the pictures of you and me on the wall

though sometimes it crosses my mind to take them down and burn them all

/i miss you i'm falling apart your voice saying what you don't mean hate bleeding hurtful words your saying degrating games that your playing then when the hitting and screaming is through i got nothing better to do then sit around and wonder why i love you/

most days i just sit by the phone hoping you'll call

sometimes i scream i don't love you at all

most days i try not to think about you

i even sometimes lie and pretend i'm better off without you

love it seriously i think it good what genre and music are you thinking

like alternative rock kinda like a nickelback and or tool/a perfect circle sound
i am really looking for a band right now

erm.....

if you really want it to look good and look "smart"

use descriptive words other than that pretty good!

3/5

cheers to the lyric.

anyone ever thought about gathering a band and rehearsing through the internet?

thanks and idk but thats a good idea though

well nickleback is good and alternative is my genre and i'm learning bass and have all the equipment to record

im a singer and searching for a band too..i found 1-2 but i dont know its not completely my style..(three days grace, breaking benjamin, perfect circle, nickelback..)
lets make a band online! >:P

id like having an online band
even though it's kind of weird...

ya it would be hard too but also fun

Great song! I'd suggest for the line, "i find myself guessing what wasnt and was true" to cut out the "and was", and just have it, "i find myself guessing what wasnt true" - just kinda makes you think a little more, and fits the cadence well.
Real songwriting talent there!

thanks for the advice it really helps me when i get another persons perspective i wish people would give more of that on some of my other works

yeah weird but lots of fun..we could create one song just for fun to see how it goes .. we could record our stuff and send to one guy that can connect them all..i think it wont be very difficult..so what instruments do you play princecomedy,synojburdonval and 4shades.. aa and seeker160 what do you say..? as i said to earlier posts im a singer.. need 1-2 guitar 1 drum and 1 bass..type is i think rock/alternative to be sure?or..?ee we will discuss about it..and if someone else that thinks is good and wanna join is welcome..just w8 to see what we need.. this is so crazy!i love it!

I think that would be great i don't have a lot of experience in mixing but i have the stuff to do it
look at some of the stuff i have posted

i umm mostl just do lyrics and sing i do dabble at guitar and drumms though

cool i think drums are better..

i can do the mixing, i have a great mixing software!
who's going to do the lyrics and
THE TITLE OF THE BAND?

do any of you live in tucson AZ i don't have any mixing equipment or recording stuff so. . .ya

oh and ya who is going to do lyrics and title the band

i can get rechording stuff just not right now