Julianne, I really need opinions on this song before I preform it!

Julianne

Down by the riverside,
a lonely girl sat and cried her eyes out
oh Julianne why do you pout
on a day when no clouds are out

Up by the brewery,
Julianne talked with me about the rain
how sunny days were all the same
and she cried for clouds until they came

(Chorus)
When the clouds blew in she stopped to cry
the rain washed salt-tears from her eyes
and her smile came out
it was so bright the sun went down
and she laughed
we danced all day benieath the sky
my Julianne and I
and her smile came out
it was so bright the sun went down
and she laughed

Sitting out by the peir,
said lets move away from here, she complied
and the tears dried in her eyes
we said all our goodbyes

Always beneath the clouds
where no sun could seek us out, we were a pair
there was always rain to spare
and her smiles weren't so rare

(Chorus)

But one day she washed away,
and i was left alone to play in the rain
only the sun could burn away the pain
rainy days just never felt the same

(Chorus)

Please leave your coments, good or bad, i really appreciate them.

hmm its a nice song.. reminds me of the Coral.. what a great band.. what genre is this?

I think it has to be some kind of acoustic soft rock, I don't know if you've ever heard of Dispatch? But something like that.

well have not heard of the group but thats a fitting genre.. well done once again

You know what, this is one of the most original and most CREATIVE posts I have seen in my life! Awesome job! And great originality! Go get a record company!

6/5

Thanks a bunch man! It means even more coming from you, as I'm a fan of almost everything you post!

good job, what genre u goin for here, its good man, keep it up. not mystyle but aye, i respect all music.