Lyrics rate: Just Another Face

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Just Another Face [Genre is somewhat thrash or experimental metal]

V1
This world it aint for me
I’m no use just a dying breed
No use crying, no need
Cause there’s
No one there to help
Never anyone there to help
(Just another dying breed)

V2
And this world
All lies.
(The moments gone when another one dies)
This fear – Won’t die
Is there anybody out there!?
(Just another dying breed) <X2>

Chorus
Just another face, just another soul
This life’s no fun when you lose control.
Just another face
Just another soul
Is there anybody out there?
There’s nobody out there
Never anybody out there

V3
This minority suffers when
The majority thrives.
No crowd, no finish, no life!
(The moments gone when another one dies)
This world!
It lies!
(Another moment gone, yet another one died)
Is there anybody out there?
(****...!)

(Chorus)

V4
Had a chance to be a next generation
Were struck down like a dog
They say that metals gone
We know that they’re wrong
(But we’re just another dying breed)
(Another dying breed)
And my word, aint ****
Struck down by that all-prevailing
Hypocrite

(Chorus) <X2>

V5
And I, don’t care, why
I just want this dream to end
Don’t care if it hurts
I might be losing my mind
-There’s a fine line between truth
And reality people. Both of them hurt
Whether you believe it or not.
When that line’s been crossed, there’s no turning back
I’m about to cross that line
I don’t wanna come back-

(Chorus)

V6
Just another face…
Just another face…
Just another face! Just another soul!
This life’s no fun when you lose control
Just another face
Two steps behind the crowd
One ahead of the rest
Just another face
Nothing you’ll ever to remember

(Chorus)

Just another face...

Daniel Mc Donald-

[From friends:
Sarah: 9
Megan: 10
Jack: 7
Sofia: 10
Michaela: 7
Lars: 7.5
Martin: 6
Adam: 10]

I really like it. Losses a little impact around V4/5, but overall I can see this working very well for a rock/metal type song