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Im only 12 and a beginner so no hatin

With this mic i can set the world alight
With this mic i can give you the fuel to fight
With this mic im giving the people back their rights
To say what they want to say and not be afraid
To not give a f--k about the government today
They try to hold us back, but im gunna push
Stand tall and just stomp on the prez's face till itll mush
Our economy is sh*t, just like bush
When people say stars and stripes now, what do they mean
Im going to have to rewrite history
For these dumba** muthaf**kers who might say im obsene
Hicks with no shirts and torn up jeans
do they think i give a f**k what they think
Im more concerned to whats happening to my streets
Were drowning ourselves in our own stink
of what we call a society today

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Originally Posted by MoeFlava

Im only 12 and a beginner so no hatin

With this mic i can set the world alight
With this mic i can give you the fuel to fight
With this mic im giving the people back their rights
To say what they want to say and not be afraid
To not give a f--k about the government today
They try to hold us back, but im gunna push
Stand tall and just stomp on the prez's face till itll mush
Our economy is sh*t, just like bush
When people say stars and stripes now, what do they mean
Im going to have to rewrite history
For these dumba** muthaf**kers who might say im obsene
Hicks with no shirts and torn up jeans
do they think i give a f**k what they think
Im more concerned to whats happening to my streets
Were drowning ourselves in our own stink
of what we call a society today

Edit and help me finish. Thx

bro this seems like a hectic rap for a 12 yr old but i seem to be very curious about where your from....
this would be a definate 10 for me

Originally Posted by MoeFlava

Im only 12 and a beginner so no hatin

With this mic i can set the world alight
With this mic i can give you the fuel to fight
With this mic im giving the people back their rights
To say what they want to say and not be afraid
To not give a f--k about the government today
They try to hold us back, but im gunna push
Stand tall and just stomp on the prez's face till itll mush
Our economy is sh*t, just like bush
When people say stars and stripes now, what do they mean
Im going to have to rewrite history
For these dumba** muthaf**kers who might say im obsene
Hicks with no shirts and torn up jeans
do they think i give a f**k what they think
Im more concerned to whats happening to my streets
Were drowning ourselves in our own stink
of what we call a society today

Edit and help me finish. Thx

nice one! 10 also from me... check also my lyrics