Hold on to my love (please comment)!!

Hi,i am writing another song about this guy who i real like and he's moving.So i am writing about it.I'm only switching a few parts of the real story to how i think it's supposed to be.
I waited for you so long
I didn't think anything would go wrong
I just wanted to be here with you forever
You made my life feel better

Chorus
I won't ever forget you
I know are love is true
This relationship was meant to be put above
When you leave just hold on to my love

Verse 2
I hate to not have you by my side
Everyone knows that i tried
It did work out but you never arrived
I'm just so sad,all i can do is sigh

Repeat Chorus

Verse 3
If you could only see
I want you to be here with me
Why did you have to go and leave my world so cold
It's just another mystery yet to be told

repeat chorus

hiyya
when you say 'you made my life better' change it to 'you made my life feel better'
and babe dnt b shy. add the rest off the song or if it's not good change it so it is good. i say don't be so shy and post the rest of the song
xoxo smileygal