20 Deep (Rap), feedback appreciated

Were on point and on spot
now were bustin **** up but we don't get caught
if your tryin to school us you better realize thatwere the teachers
and you just got taught
and dont bother runnin to the cops cause we have em bought

Smoke is always pouring from my mustang
and if you **** with it ill show you my fangs
cause i dont like *****z touchin my thangs
unless you wana get down and kiss my ring
ya I'm white but I still got bling cause I'm
a motha ****in Kottonmouth King
now were at your door, there goes the bell da da ding(door bell noise)

Chorus: Drivin 20 shots deep but not swervin around (swervin sound)
just blastin my tunes and crankin up the sound (treb or bass boost)
on my way to the growers so I can grab my pound (cough)
and if the piggies come with hounds I won't be found (siren)

If you get caught you don't know us
and you dont have nothin to confess
were back on the street rollin through the hood
*****z try to talk trash but they just wish they could
no love, so Ima teach em some manners like their mothers should of

**** all you *****z whos hatin on me
keep talkin and you'll be another check on my killin spree
but I won't get locked up cause my lawyer has no integrity
only diamonds and gold so it won't be long before they set me free

Chorus

Im gonna open your eyes and make you see
Im gonna change your mind and make you agree
Theres no need for hate so just relax and
smoke this tree with me but dont take
me for granted or I'm back on that spree

I'm on top of my business even though its causin me stress
if you wana chillax then you know the address
you better be straight though cause we don't
wana have to clean up a mess
or end up on the front page of the goddamn press
we strive for perfection and won't settle for less

Chorus

This **** is potent, it's that 1 hitter quitter
so we don't need no blunt splitter but
were rollin one anyways, well hit yo girl with a shotgun
hit her till shes lost and dazed (inhale)
and her high is unable to be raised
but you know were sittin here unphased
which is why all your faces look so amazed (exhale)

If you see the flash of red its time to run
your not an indian but you got a dot on your head
and I'm lookin down the scope of my gun
lining up my shot and preparing for the fun (gun cocking)
dont matter when, at night or under the sun (gun shot + blood squirting)

Chorus

What? Are you talking to me?
I don't think so but you best know so
if you got a problem come see me then ho
I'm not afraid and if you keep it up
you and your boys will be gettin sprayed

Whether were rollin by or walkin the street
you know were ready so just admit defeat
or get ready to feel the heat
were like the ****in SAS
we keep it elite

If I'm bored I'll pull out my blade and
if the mission requires it we got enough for a full out raid
so you better watch your *** cause if
your a hit then were takin you out and gettin paid (bills shuffling)

Chorus

Drivin with a bottle in one hand
and a blunt in the other
a cop pulled me over and started talkin about my mother
I was like wha.. wha.. what did you say?
and he started pullin his tazer right away
I got pissed and pulled out my AK with the red dot lazer
and pulled the trigger and watched it spray (Automatic gun shots)
he fell to the ground as I took his life away
tried to tell em not to **** with my yay (snorting)

and if the piggies come with hounds I won't be found
as they fall to the ground they won't make a sound
after their skull is shreded from the 50 cal round
I won't be found

Originally Posted by 2012

interesting kmk

ya just kinda threw in the name cause it worked, kmk are awesome though lol