
::Sun Rise:: a song I wrote just NOW,
Thread: ::Sun Rise:: a song I wrote just NOW,
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ShadowLeeSharp said:
01-22-2011 08:11 AM
::Sun Rise:: a song I wrote just NOW,
^_^ Shadow Lee Sharp ^_^
Stuck inside this Bedroom. With everything to do,
now ask me why the heck, should I listen to the blues?
I could be dancing, to the other happy songs,
then again I can't keep up with the beat.
Of the modern age Happy feet.
Should I? Or should I not?
"Perfect" the story, or change the plot?!
Because I'm DYING of, Writers Block, an
d its only 2 AM.
And I could be sleeping! But I CAN'T sleep if I keep this up,
I just had another cup of luck, called energy drink.
Should I, or could I? Well I could of, if I would of! And I should of, could of, would of, Should of fell asleep- when it was time....
BUT I COULDNT, cause a light was growing threw the skyline.
Stuck inside this bedroom, with almost EVERYTHING to do.
And ask me why the heck
Don't I sleep on the cue?
But I could be dancing! To some other happy songs, than again,
I can't keep up with the beat.
Of the modern aged Happy feet.
I could, if I would. But I suggest I NOT,
I like to see the sun rise and the only time I ever see it,
Is when "All Nighters" are all completed.
So wait along you may be seated, just DON'T.. Fall asleep,
I've been awake.. For seventy six hours STRAIGHT,
now ask me why the heck, did you stay up so late?
Then I'll scream, DANCING!
And learning EVERY happy song,
look and see I'm still head strong!
You'll stare at MEE with a sleeping mask on.
Could I, or would I? Should I fall asleep? Would I ruin Such a rep, you see?!..
...well, No..
Sleeping will just have to learn how to let go..
it's barley 6 AM, the lights are getting quite dim, and Im tired.. Just a little bit..
Let me take a sip of, my.. energy.. Drink..
BACK TO DANCING! To learning EVERY HAPPY SONG, look and see I'm still head strong! I got the sun rise in my mind and I'm just waiting for the shine,,
Ooooh.. Thanks for your time..
Comment and tell me how you liked it, I named it Sun Rise..
LoL anyone should figure this song out.
Basically I have a very hard time trying to sleep,
and almost everyday I'll wait to see the sunrise.
Last edited by ShadowLeeSharp; 04-14-2011 at 02:57 AM.
Reason: Changed verses and whatnot
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PointZero said:
01-22-2011 08:49 AM
Haha, I'm just kidding! I thought it was pretty good for a fun song! Keep it up
Oh, and maybe if you put the lyrics in a different manner than sentences it would be better, idk.
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ShadowLeeSharp said:
01-22-2011 10:51 AM

Originally Posted by
PointZero
Haha, I'm just kidding! I thought it was pretty good for a fun song! Keep it up

Oh, and maybe if you put the lyrics in a different manner than sentences it would be better, idk.
Yeh.. (awh mah god I feel asleep after 83 hours of being awake) well I had to copy n paste since I'm on my iPad, however I didn't do the same with that song I wrote, R3GR3T. That's why it's written differently, thanks lol xD
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ShadowLeeSharp said:
02-01-2011 12:18 AM
:0 I remember this song.. I forgot all about it -.- SO SAD xD
ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
-This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
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ShadowLeeSharp said:
04-14-2011 02:53 AM
I wrote this song so long ago..... But I love it!! There you go moon! The sun rise song!!!! <3333
ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
-This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
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MoonRide*r* said:
04-14-2011 03:03 AM
Oh THAT one!
Yeah I remember it, I don't think it was the first that I read of yours but yeah I remember Happy Feet and energy drink and seventy six hours for sure
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ShadowLeeSharp said:
04-14-2011 03:05 AM
LooL yeahh, I was such a bad writer back then (who's to say I'm not one now? Well yur just a kid.. And no ones talking to you Jared go away. Go away? I'm in your brain!!! AHHHHHH!!! ) <----- I had a moment.....
ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
-This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
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MoonRide*r* said:
04-14-2011 04:20 AM
'S ok we all have moments
....... but probably not quite like that one >.> ... lol j/k 
It always pays to listen to the voices coz if it's really important we don't want to miss it.
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ShadowLeeSharp said:
04-14-2011 04:22 AM
My voices in my head are terrible people
WHAT?! I am your best friend!!
Be quiet.
What Eva sista, I'm in your dreams. Better watch it..
.......
Okay.. Yupp, arguments with my imaginary friend Jared WHOM has been my I.F since I was 7
ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
-This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
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MoonRide*r* said:
04-14-2011 04:31 AM
So who's Eva? 
I need to logoff soon :-s ...
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ShadowLeeSharp said:
04-14-2011 04:35 AM
Eva? No one? ????
Awh
dammit...
ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
-This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
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MoonRide*r* said:
04-14-2011 04:36 AM
Yeah
I gotta finish up at work and go home
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ShadowLeeSharp said:
04-14-2011 04:39 AM
ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
-This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-