::Sun Rise:: a song I wrote just NOW,

Thread: ::Sun Rise:: a song I wrote just NOW,

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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

    Talking ::Sun Rise:: a song I wrote just NOW,

    ^_^ Shadow Lee Sharp ^_^

    Stuck inside this Bedroom. With everything to do,
    now ask me why the heck, should I listen to the blues?
    I could be dancing, to the other happy songs,
    then again I can't keep up with the beat.
    Of the modern age Happy feet.

    Should I? Or should I not?
    "Perfect" the story, or change the plot?!
    Because I'm DYING of, Writers Block, an
    d its only 2 AM.
    And I could be sleeping! But I CAN'T sleep if I keep this up,
    I just had another cup of luck, called energy drink.

    Should I, or could I? Well I could of, if I would of! And I should of, could of, would of, Should of fell asleep- when it was time....
    BUT I COULDNT, cause a light was growing threw the skyline.

    Stuck inside this bedroom, with almost EVERYTHING to do.
    And ask me why the heck
    Don't I sleep on the cue?
    But I could be dancing! To some other happy songs, than again,
    I can't keep up with the beat.
    Of the modern aged Happy feet.

    I could, if I would. But I suggest I NOT,
    I like to see the sun rise and the only time I ever see it,
    Is when "All Nighters" are all completed.
    So wait along you may be seated, just DON'T.. Fall asleep,


    I've been awake.. For seventy six hours STRAIGHT,
    now ask me why the heck, did you stay up so late?
    Then I'll scream, DANCING!
    And learning EVERY happy song,
    look and see I'm still head strong!

    You'll stare at MEE with a sleeping mask on.
    Could I, or would I? Should I fall asleep? Would I ruin Such a rep, you see?!..
    ...well, No..
    Sleeping will just have to learn how to let go..

    it's barley 6 AM, the lights are getting quite dim, and Im tired.. Just a little bit..
    Let me take a sip of, my.. energy.. Drink..
    BACK TO DANCING! To learning EVERY HAPPY SONG, look and see I'm still head strong! I got the sun rise in my mind and I'm just waiting for the shine,,
    Ooooh.. Thanks for your time..



    Comment and tell me how you liked it, I named it Sun Rise..
    LoL anyone should figure this song out.
    Basically I have a very hard time trying to sleep,
    and almost everyday I'll wait to see the sunrise.
    Last edited by ShadowLeeSharp; 04-14-2011 at 02:57 AM. Reason: Changed verses and whatnot
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    Haha, I'm just kidding! I thought it was pretty good for a fun song! Keep it up Oh, and maybe if you put the lyrics in a different manner than sentences it would be better, idk.
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    Quote Originally Posted by PointZero View Post
    Haha, I'm just kidding! I thought it was pretty good for a fun song! Keep it up Oh, and maybe if you put the lyrics in a different manner than sentences it would be better, idk.
    Yeh.. (awh mah god I feel asleep after 83 hours of being awake) well I had to copy n paste since I'm on my iPad, however I didn't do the same with that song I wrote, R3GR3T. That's why it's written differently, thanks lol xD
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    :0 I remember this song.. I forgot all about it -.- SO SAD xD
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
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    I wrote this song so long ago..... But I love it!! There you go moon! The sun rise song!!!! <3333
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Oh THAT one! Yeah I remember it, I don't think it was the first that I read of yours but yeah I remember Happy Feet and energy drink and seventy six hours for sure
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    LooL yeahh, I was such a bad writer back then (who's to say I'm not one now? Well yur just a kid.. And no ones talking to you Jared go away. Go away? I'm in your brain!!! AHHHHHH!!! ) <----- I had a moment.....
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
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    'S ok we all have moments ....... but probably not quite like that one >.> ... lol j/k
    It always pays to listen to the voices coz if it's really important we don't want to miss it.
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    My voices in my head are terrible people

    WHAT?! I am your best friend!!

    Be quiet.

    What Eva sista, I'm in your dreams. Better watch it..

    .......


    Okay.. Yupp, arguments with my imaginary friend Jared WHOM has been my I.F since I was 7
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
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    So who's Eva?

    I need to logoff soon :-s ...
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    Eva? No one? ????


    Awh dammit...
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
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    Yeah I gotta finish up at work and go home
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    Ah.. I see :/
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-