I was born in this country
Raised in blocks of concrete
Spent days outside with my
Friends and lots of fun
No big problems at school
As I kept right their rules
Did my homework and then
Played games in the sun
Chorus 1:
Those were the days of my life
Blood in my veins boiling wild
Pain changing fast into smile
No doubt and fear in my mind
Lived every second at full
Everyday was something new
didn´t care for future
there was just here and now
Learnt to know what is right
Without wondering why
Took everything as it was
Natural somehow
Chorus 2:
Those were the days of my life
Blood in my veins boiling wild
Pain changing fast into smile
No doubt and fear in my mind
For everything there was a sense
In my childhood in innocence
Chorus 2:
Those were the days of my life
Blood in my veins boiling wild
Pain changing fast into smile
No doubt and fear in my mind
For everything there was a sense
In my childhood in innocence
In my childhood…in innocence… in innocence…in…innocence!!!
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01. Childhood in Innocence - BEHIND THE WALL OF FREEDOM
Last edited by Hugo Zhor; 04-12-2011 at 02:50 AM. Reason: mistake
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Ooh, great ideas in there
This bit is my favourite, it completely captures what you experience: "Learnt to know what is right
Without wondering why
Took everything as it was
Natural somehow"
A couple of things about grammer: "Friends and lots of fun", if you were talking about what you have done, you would say you had lots of fun, like: "Friends and had lots of fun". The word "work" is already plural, so no need to add an s: "Did my homeworks and then" should be "Did my homework and then".
Anyway great work -
Like this. These - "Blood in my veins boiling wild" and "Raised in blocks of concrete" - bring to mind the phrase 'concrete jungle'
It's brilliant. Great representation of childhood, methinks"If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..." -
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I'm not so sure about "spent with lots of fun", what is it you're trying to say?
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There r lots of smileys in this forum but my favorites are ": D" witch turn into
when you don't have that space. And :yaho o_fun: witch turn into this
without the space between the O.
Or you could click "Go Advanced" Button right near the Post Quick Reply Button. There's the whole pack of them if you need them haahahn also you could click the MORE button and more smileys appear
hope it helped Hun
Now! Let me post a new post to see what I thought about your awesome lil song here ^^ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
-This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly- -
This totally catches the moment of being a young child living his life,
Pain changing fast into smile
No doubt and fear in my mind
Lived every second at full
Everyday was something new
didn´t care for future
there was just here and now
That seems to remind me of my younger brotherwho is, a young 6 year old boy. Lol, nice ideas Shadow really likes it!
ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
-This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly- -