Hello I am a metal, hard rock song writer and guitarist. I am looking for a title for this song and some feed back on if it good or if it suck. I will take any comment. Thanks and hope you guys like this piece. If it's good i will come up with some riffs for it.
I see the world change
But you still remain the same*
Broken bottles in my hand
Think what went wrong*
But you'll never see
The side of me
You'll never see
The side of me*
You left behind.
You left behind*
Everything that was yours*
Everything you had
It will never turn out*
To be what I expected*
*
Everything I am
Is everything you need*
But you will never turn out*
Anything that I expected*
I don't belong*
We got left behind!
You ask you self*
What this is*
Who you are
All you see*
All you see*
Is what was left behind
Left behind
Left behind
Everything I am
Is everything you need*
But you will never turn out*
Anything that I expected*
I don't belong*
You don't belong*
We, we got left behind*
We got left behind!
you say to your self*
What will change*
What will Change*
To fix what we had
But you never realized*
I was all ready gone!
Left behind*
We got left behind
You let it all slip away.*