Hello I am a metal, hard rock song writer and guitarist. I am looking for a title for this song and some feed back on if it good or if it suck. I will take any comment. Thanks and hope you guys like this piece. If it's good i will come up with some riffs for it.

I see the world change
But you still remain the same*
Broken bottles in my hand
Think what went wrong*
But you'll never see
The side of me
You'll never see
The side of me*
You left behind.

You left behind*
Everything that was yours*
Everything you had
It will never turn out*
To be what I expected*
*
Everything I am
Is everything you need*
But you will never turn out*
Anything that I expected*
I don't belong*
We got left behind!

You ask you self*
What this is*
Who you are
All you see*
All you see*
Is what was left behind
Left behind
Left behind

Everything I am
Is everything you need*
But you will never turn out*
Anything that I expected*
I don't belong*
You don't belong*
We, we got left behind*
We got left behind!

you say to your self*
What will change*
What will Change*
To fix what we had
But you never realized*
I was all ready gone!

Left behind*
We got left behind
You let it all slip away.*

The Abandoned. Outcasted.

I'll keep in mind. Was it good ok shity?

No it is good

every song or lyric should tell a story. yours has told one. I particularly like the stories that are presented in a fractured format. to say that the sentences are not totally proper, rather they express a thought in a few words. you have done this in part of your lyrics and it works well!!

Thanks man. I made this song in like 5 mins. I was just about to crash one night and it just hit me. I write song that are ok and the go back and fix it, but this one just hit me so hard I never looked back at in and changed it yet.

I too have this method and just sometimes it does not require editing

the title I have is "opportunity Lost"