tell what you think if these lyrics I wrote:

Thread: tell what you think if these lyrics I wrote:

Tags: None
  1. writer1 said:

    Exclamation tell what you think if these lyrics I wrote:

    tell what you think if these lyrics I wrote:
    I wait forever, don’t leave me alone
    I am here and not just a still stone
    My heart feels the pain, not on loan
    I am not rich, don’t sit on a throne

    Come to me as soon as you can
    You said you are sweet, your name is Ann
    I will watch outside for your black sedan
    Come soon, while I am a young man

    Chorus
    Please help me, you need me
    You call me, you tell me every time
    I need you so, I can’t let you be
    You told me so many times, no mountain we can’t climb

    I feel the sun, the warmth of the sun
    I wait on the beach; I am in for the long run
    I promise you this; us together, will not be a rerun
    We both have not lost, but we have won



    The tide goes in and the tide goes out
    So many times I wanted to shout
    You tell me I am the one, you love me, I have no doubt
    There is so much, I have so much clout

    Chorus
    Please help me, you need me
    You call me, you tell me every time
    I need you so, I can’t let you be
    You told me so many times, no mountain we can’t climb

    My mind wanders, but not anymore
    Now we understand, our love is no longer a chore
    I remember you when you came through the back door
    I was reading a good book, on my wooden floor

    I see you now Ann, walking in the shallow water, coming my way
    You came on time, without delay
    I know now as you said to me, I will forever stay
    No longer will I think about going, I will not stray





    Chorus
    Please help me, you need me
    You call me, you tell me every time
    I need you so, I can’t let you be
    You told me so many times, no mountain we can’t climb
    Chorus
    Please help me, you need me
    You call me, you tell me every time
    I need you so, I can’t let you be
    You told me so many times, no mountain we can’t climb


    I let you go once as you let me go too
    We asked each other, is there another, who
    In our absence, our love grew
    We sent each other message; we did not get the clue

    It is alright now, because we are now one
    You look so beautiful, in the warm sun
    I am so relieved, we both never felt, what is done is done
    If we did, my heart would feel as if it weighed a ton



    Friends who helped me I love so much
    There are there for you, giving you their touch
    There is nothing to stop us, not even a crutch
    No interruptions, no call, nothing such

    Chorus
    Please help me, you need me
    You call me, you tell me every time
    I need you so, I can’t let you be
    You told me so many times, no mountain we can’t climb
    Chorus
    Please help me, you need me
    You call me, you tell me every time
    I need you so, I can’t let you be
    You told me so many times, no mountain we can’t climb
     

loading