tell what you think if these lyrics I wrote:
I wait forever, don’t leave me alone
I am here and not just a still stone
My heart feels the pain, not on loan
I am not rich, don’t sit on a throne

Come to me as soon as you can
You said you are sweet, your name is Ann
I will watch outside for your black sedan
Come soon, while I am a young man

Chorus
Please help me, you need me
You call me, you tell me every time
I need you so, I can’t let you be
You told me so many times, no mountain we can’t climb

I feel the sun, the warmth of the sun
I wait on the beach; I am in for the long run
I promise you this; us together, will not be a rerun
We both have not lost, but we have won



The tide goes in and the tide goes out
So many times I wanted to shout
You tell me I am the one, you love me, I have no doubt
There is so much, I have so much clout

Chorus
Please help me, you need me
You call me, you tell me every time
I need you so, I can’t let you be
You told me so many times, no mountain we can’t climb

My mind wanders, but not anymore
Now we understand, our love is no longer a chore
I remember you when you came through the back door
I was reading a good book, on my wooden floor

I see you now Ann, walking in the shallow water, coming my way
You came on time, without delay
I know now as you said to me, I will forever stay
No longer will I think about going, I will not stray





Chorus
Please help me, you need me
You call me, you tell me every time
I need you so, I can’t let you be
You told me so many times, no mountain we can’t climb
Chorus
Please help me, you need me
You call me, you tell me every time
I need you so, I can’t let you be
You told me so many times, no mountain we can’t climb


I let you go once as you let me go too
We asked each other, is there another, who
In our absence, our love grew
We sent each other message; we did not get the clue

It is alright now, because we are now one
You look so beautiful, in the warm sun
I am so relieved, we both never felt, what is done is done
If we did, my heart would feel as if it weighed a ton



Friends who helped me I love so much
There are there for you, giving you their touch
There is nothing to stop us, not even a crutch
No interruptions, no call, nothing such

Chorus
Please help me, you need me
You call me, you tell me every time
I need you so, I can’t let you be
You told me so many times, no mountain we can’t climb
Chorus
Please help me, you need me
You call me, you tell me every time
I need you so, I can’t let you be
You told me so many times, no mountain we can’t climb