Title: Your Own Creation (DARK SONG)

Way into the night
An alley fills with my screams
Bound and exposed
Unable to break free from violation
The pain I feel everywhere on my body
The seed inside, left to germinate
They do now know
What they've done

(chorus)
My heart has turned to stone
My mind has shattered
No thoughts of boys or love come to me
Thoughts of vengence, of screams from my oppress
They fear thier own creation
A being, soul purpose is vengence
Against all who oppresses those who can't fight back
I sence the fFear of your own creation
Scream for me, scream louder!
Beg for merci, though you deserve none
Shall have none
Look into my eyes
Your own creation
(chorus end)

Looking at me in the light
Many stop and stare
Many call me angel, sweet, maybe they see weakness
In the dark
You see the truth
Your love turns to fear
My heart can bear no love
Love causes weakness
Never will I be the Victum ever again

(chorusx2)
My heart has turned to stone
My mind has shattered
No thoughts of boys or love come to me
Thoughts of vengence, of screams from my oppress
They fear thier own creation
A being, soul purpose is vengence
Against all who oppresses those who can't fight back
I sence the fFear of your own creation
Scream for me, scream louder!
Beg for merci, though you deserve none
Shall have none
Look into my eyes
Your own creation
(chorus end)

Your Blood slowly leaves your body
Your screams is music to my ears
You see hatred, burning in mine
no room for weakness
My eyes are now black holes
Drainning all your good feelings
You won't die alone
Many opressors will follow you!

Chorusx3)
My heart has turned to stone
My mind has shattered
No thoughts of boys or love come to me
Thoughts of vengence, of screams from my oppress
They fear thier own creation
A being, soul purpose is vengence
Against all who oppresses those who can't fight back
I sence the fFear of your own creation
Scream for me, scream louder!
Beg for merci, though you deserve none
Shall have none
Look into my eyes
Your own creation
(chorus end)

Very good, I really like the emotion and anger you've put into this, the only things I can see wrong with this are a few grammar mistakes, such as "Your screams is music to my ears" should be "Your screams are music to my ears"

Overall I really like it,

Keep on writing ^^

LazzurusMan