Every Chance You Never Take

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  1. squishy3 said:

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    When you were just 18
    You thought you knew everything
    Where you’d go, what you’d do
    The future all mapped out for you

    Here we stand years later
    You’re looking for something greater
    All your plans have crumbled
    How does it feel to be humbled?

    Now every footstep you’re making
    Someone’s already taken

    Chorus:
    Don’t you know
    You don’t have it all figured out
    Just let it go
    You’ll never learn what life’s about
    So be the wave
    Leave a trail in your wake
    Don’t be afraid
    You miss every chance you never take

    Thought you’d be in a bigger place
    Now you’re just taking up space
    In a box, in a room
    In another tall building, with a top floor view

    Here you stand before the window
    Looking at your dreams passing by you
    The voice of reason got in the way
    Now you’re just working for the pay

    Every footstep you’re making
    Someone’s already taken

    Chorus:
    Don’t you know
    You don’t have it all figured out
    Just let it go
    You’ll never learn what life’s about
    So be the wave
    That leaves a trail in its wake
    Don’t be afraid
    You miss every chance you never take

    Bridge:
    Every footstep you’re making
    Someone’s already taken
    So be the new wave that
    Leaves a trail in your wake and
    Just wash away
    All the plans they’ve made
    Don’t be afraid of change
    And you’ll find your way

    Chorus:
    Now you know
    You don’t have it all figured out
    Just let it go
    You’ll never learn what life’s about
    So be the wave
    That leaves a trail in its wake
    Don’t be afraid
    You miss every chance you never take
     
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    Frankie Jasmine said:

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    Dear squishy3,

    I checked out today's "What's New" and saw your song title: "Every Chance You Never Take." Because of the thought behind that title, I checked out your song.

    IMHO, this is a good song, and I like it. I wish I could hear it to music! I have no major criticism of it, the sound is good and the English correct too! [Unless it would be "You'll miss every chance you never take." But there are other ways to say it, as you've done. Even beyond that is poetic license, which you've earned with this song (whether it's needed or not--as both ways of saying it probably work!)

    Good job. And thank you for sharing your song.
     
  3. rashid.martin123@gmail.co said:

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    You have a truly remamrkable way with words, i can't fault this song in any way
     
  4. squishy3 said:

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    Thanks so much you guys!